Fear of the Unknown

       A crack in the pavement
          Does it portend
       a death in the family
          an untimely end  

       Is it an opening
          for widow’s weeds 
       or just a spittoon
          for sunflower seeds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 4:15 PM
Oh I love this short insightful poem . A fave
Wolf Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 7:23 PM
Sure do appreciate the fave, Andrea, especially coming from you. Thank you so much. Cheers, Gershon
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 2:26 AM
as a spokesperson for the bicycling sunflowers group I find the idea of "spitting" sunflowers hilarious....
Wolf Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 7:24 PM
Myself, I once held your titled, but what I spoke got twisted... Humorous comment of the month so far, John! You ARE DA MAN!
Jones Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 12:06 AM
Cute examination of superstitions like step on a crack break your mama's back!
Wolf Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 7:34 PM
Ouch! Don't do that!!... That's such an awful thought, isn't it. It must be culled from those awful British nursery rhymes like Humpty Dumpty, Jack & Jill, and all the others that speak of injury and pain!
George Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 10:53 PM
A crack in the pavement may be because of a number of reasons. It needn't evoke serious fears in us. All we have to do is walk careful not to fall in the crack and prevent our bones from being cracked....! .... :)
Wolf Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 7:35 PM
You are wise beyond your years, young lady!
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