Fear of Goodbye

whispers carry through the silent air
and linger for moments after which spoken
I take the time to let them echo inside my ear
before they fade and their presence is broken
 
shallow breaths in a rhythmic type of tune
wishing for the moment to last forever
afraid that goodbye will be said too soon
breaking the bond that ties us together
 
locked in a gaze only to be suddenly taken
away from what was cherished between
distance widens I pray to be mistaken
 from what is now being forcefully seen
 
fear running wild I struggle to meet your eyes
as the last whisper I hear is one of goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ellsworth Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 2:50 PM
Woah.. this is a very powerful write. Beautiful.
Brown Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Harry's "Goodbye" contest Nicole. I am sorry it is late. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 5:55 PM
wow, you did a GREAT sonnet for this contest. Congrats on your win. I thought it was one of the better ones!
Marrier Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 12:03 PM
thank you Andrea:)
Horsman Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 4:03 AM
congrats Nicole on your 7th place winner in my goodbye sonnet contest....
Marrier Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 12:54 PM
thanks you harry:)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 1:29 AM
Congratulations nicole, on your wonderful sonnet xx
Marrier Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 12:54 PM
thank you mandy:)
A   Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 9:22 PM
Nicole, congratulations ;-) In Harry's "goodbye" contest.. Good night~ PD
Marrier Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 9:59 PM
thank you:)
Roberts Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 6:16 PM
Great Nicole...congrats....Seren
Marrier Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 6:20 PM
thank you:)
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