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Fear of Freedom

fearful to walk the talk, we balk mindful eye perceives ego stalk something’s not right, inner conflict being tendency to resist ascension awaits, yet we gawk 28-July-2021 Bite Size Poem no15 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Kauffman Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 2:36 PM
"Ascension awaits, yet we balk!" Wonderfully stated Seeker. Nice powerful rhymes. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Seeker Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 7:36 PM
Thanks Sam!
Alex Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Beautiful Bite. Congratulations on your win!
Seeker Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Thank you, dear Chris!
La France Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Seeker, a deep poem in just 5 lines, leading to profound thoughts. The words that stood out for me are, "something's not right, inner conflict being tendency to resist" I find this so true in life (my life), overcoming that inner conflict and struggle ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Seeker Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Inner conflict is between head and heart, between ego and soul. Recognise, meld, transcend. Wish you the best
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