Fear of Freedom

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fearful to walk the talk, we balk mindful eye perceives ego stalk something’s not right, inner conflict being tendency to resist ascension awaits, yet we gawk 28-July-2021 Bite Size Poem no15 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/3/2021 2:36:00 PM

"Ascension awaits, yet we balk!" Wonderfully stated Seeker. Nice powerful rhymes. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/3/2021 7:36:00 PM

Thanks Sam!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/1/2021 6:39:00 AM

Beautiful Bite. Congratulations on your win!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/1/2021 12:26:00 PM

Thank you, dear Chris!

Constance La France

Date: 7/28/2021 7:19:00 AM

Seeker, a deep poem in just 5 lines, leading to profound thoughts. The words that stood out for me are, "something's not right, inner conflict being tendency to resist" I find this so true in life (my life), overcoming that inner conflict and struggle ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/28/2021 8:41:00 AM

Inner conflict is between head and heart, between ego and soul. Recognise, meld, transcend. Wish you the best