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Fear Lingering

What if tomorrow never comes And leaves me frail alone and blue In my ear echoes sound of drums Life would be barren without you My saddened heart could not construe What if tomorrow never comes In stormy skies where no birds flew Of love remaining merely crumbs The melody my finger strums Where there were hearts that beat as two What if tomorrow never comes Forsaken morning breaks in lieu Unsung prayers shushed as taboo Lingering fear that it becomes What if this is naught but adieu What if tomorrow never comes AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on May 16, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE G sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD and January 13, 2020 for contest DISTANT REFRAINS sponsored by JOSEPH MAY

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Date: 5/17/2020 6:13:00 PM
You are an expert on relaying in words the value and importance of love. Love all of your work Line!
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Date: 5/17/2020 7:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Lonna. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/17/2020 6:53:00 AM
Beautiful phrases and longings, congratulations on your winning poem dear Line. Luv, SuZ
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Date: 5/17/2020 9:53:00 AM
Thank you, SuZ. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/17/2020 5:59:00 AM
Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Line - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard
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Date: 5/17/2020 9:53:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/17/2020 4:04:00 PM
wonderful, tomorrow may not come for everyone but true love lasts forever in this life and the next. Knowing that we muster the strength to carry on
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Date: 1/17/2020 7:10:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 1/15/2020 5:42:00 AM
I think that we all ask ourselves this question when life is hard on us. Still, tomorrow comes and sometimes it brings joy with it. A smooth read.
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Date: 1/17/2020 7:10:00 PM
Thanks, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/14/2020 1:06:00 PM
I feel your words and many will feel like this...well written..
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Date: 1/14/2020 3:35:00 PM
Thanks, SO. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/14/2020 1:45:00 AM
Beautifully penned.. Great entry in the contest..
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Date: 1/14/2020 3:35:00 PM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/13/2020 9:42:00 PM
Gorgeously done, Line. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/13/2020 9:48:00 PM
I can't get that refrain out of my head. I've used it in three poems so far. Maybe I got it out of my system now. LOL

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