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Fear is woven into the fabric of peace like a thread in a shawl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/9/2021 4:09:00 AM
I have read these fourteen words in sheer amazement three times. How can you do all of this in fourteen tiny little common, ordinary, every day English words?
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Date: 7/3/2021 8:29:00 AM
Well penned! To think about it, you are true.
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Date: 7/3/2021 6:34:00 AM
Fear is proportional to our aspirations to achieve peace, my friend, Lasaad, the higher the aspirations the longer the thread in the shawl. Well done! Blessings
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Date: 7/3/2021 1:26:00 AM
And then trouble will begin. Perfect.
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Date: 7/2/2021 11:14:00 AM
This certainly seems to be true, Lasaad. The two are so often intertwined, which in itself is most frightening.
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Date: 7/2/2021 1:38:00 PM
True my friend, thanks for your generous comment and appreciation. Blessings and kindest regards
Date: 7/2/2021 10:51:00 AM
Wisdom words, Lasaad--meaningful poem.
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Date: 7/2/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Vijay appreciate your kind words, peace and blessings
Date: 7/2/2021 10:12:00 AM
- Well written, Las - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/2/2021 10:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I'm glad you like it // enjoy your day// hugs. Lasaad
Date: 7/2/2021 9:57:00 AM
In any peace there's always that fear that it won't last. There's wisdom in your monoku Lasaad. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 7/2/2021 10:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom, so true, and that's simply because humanity has no trust for each other. Happy 4th enjoy your long weekend.

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