Fear

Fear is strange, it scares you to death But never leaves your side It scares you so much that you lose the will to fight Fear eats you from within Until you have no strength left but just to give in You feel no emotion because all you feel is scared And you never dare, you never dare to hope You never dare to love You never dare to fight Because you have already given up Already given up on life....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 2:46:00 PM

Adaline Mullick, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/27/2015 2:10:00 PM

HOPE TO SEE YOU HERE 2016

Gail Debole

Date: 3/8/2014 6:16:00 AM

Hello Adaline - Welcome to the soup! May you be able to confront your fears and move forward in life. Sometimes it helps to concentrate on one fear at a time. Thank you for sharing your honest thoughts about this personal topic. - Gail

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2014 11:41:00 PM

Adaline, . Happy valentines, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Kenisha Shines

Date: 2/3/2014 2:25:00 AM

nice poem, very true that fear kills us from within so we have to confront fear so we become more stronger.have a great day.

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2014 9:08:00 AM

Adaline, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"