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Favorite Weakness

Mixed feelings
Boquet of thoughts
Hot now
Cold then
Infusion of emotion

Want to let you go
Want to hold you near
So far
But close

Make me cry
Make me smile
Leap for joy at thoughts of you
Your voice
my sinful delight
Guilty of missing you

Terrible weakness
You are to me

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/23/2025 12:04:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 1/23/2016 10:31:00 PM

ANN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2013 7:19:00 AM

This work is filled with great emotion and expressiveness..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Sharon Rose Piwang

Date: 1/3/2013 10:03:00 AM

I just read your poem. I understand the feeling behind it and you put it so well...good job.