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Favorite Weakness

Mixed feelings Boquet of thoughts Hot now Cold then Infusion of emotion Want to let you go Want to hold you near So far But close Make me cry Make me smile Leap for joy at thoughts of you Your voice my sinful delight Guilty of missing you Terrible weakness You are to me

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/23/2025 12:04:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 1/23/2016 10:31:00 PM

ANN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2013 7:19:00 AM

This work is filled with great emotion and expressiveness..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Sharon Rose Piwang

Date: 1/3/2013 10:03:00 AM

I just read your poem. I understand the feeling behind it and you put it so well...good job.