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Rain An unnoticed ship sails across the sky. Its leaden oars trail swift exploration down the horizon. It stern-ward went forth, swift over northbound upon the briny shore and firmly stood upon grassy hills, emptied its bulk. Rain. 4/1/2019 Favorite Poem From Last Week (March 31-April 6, 2019) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lu Loo

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Date: 4/19/2019 9:33:00 PM
Captivating and creative imagery, Eve. Congratulations on your excellent win with your beautiful and dramatic poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/19/2019 8:10:00 AM
Great poem Eve ~ congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/18/2019 9:10:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing... God bless you.
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Date: 4/17/2019 3:14:00 PM
I loved the metaphor used to your wonderful ending Eve. Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! Have a lovely Easter! xxoo
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Date: 4/4/2019 11:57:00 AM
There is nothing as elemental as the elements; this DM brings it home.
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Date: 4/4/2019 8:06:00 AM
What a creative piece on RAIN, Eve! Janice
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Date: 4/2/2019 11:41:00 AM
Very unique, a good read, Eve. All the best .... CayCay
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Date: 4/2/2019 1:18:00 AM
A powerful DM vision!
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