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Beauty The fields of lavender purge their purple souls in rolling rows as they steal your breath. She was once like they... transparent, innocent of knowing her beauty matched theirs and could make you weep. In a vast sea of scents and sights poetry floats to the top gathering sunrays as if they were tangible. 4-1-19 ~First Place~ Favorite Poem From Last Week (March 31-April 6, 2019) Sponsor Lu Loo

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Date: 5/2/2019 7:48:00 PM
I am back here to remember if I faved it or not. Here goes!!!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/2/2019 8:26:00 PM
It is still the same from you and Robert. Something is messed up Andrea. Thank you for trying. : ) xxoo
Date: 4/19/2019 9:58:00 PM
Returning with hearty congratulations for your excellent and well deserved win with this breathtaking poem, Connie. Warmest wishes always, my lovely friend.. ~Susan
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/20/2019 2:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Susan. I love lavender and its lovely scent. Have a blessed Easter my friend. xxoo
Date: 4/18/2019 10:13:00 PM
Back with big congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/20/2019 2:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve. This poem was inspired and came easy. Have a blessed Easter. xxoo
Date: 4/18/2019 1:21:00 PM
Beautiful, Connie. Everything about it! Congratulations on your much deserved win.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/18/2019 3:19:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. Have a wonderful Easter. xxoo
Date: 4/18/2019 11:05:00 AM
Beautiful poem. congratulations on your first place win. you so dissevered it.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/18/2019 3:19:00 PM
Thank you very much Michael. : )
Date: 4/18/2019 3:58:00 AM
Beautiful panned.
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Date: 4/17/2019 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Connie ~ well deserved!
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Date: 4/10/2019 7:50:00 PM
Such poignant beauty emanates so purely in this finely written poem, Connie! Enjoyed this one! :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/12/2019 5:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Laura. This one was inspired by a movie about van Gogh. His work has grown on me immensely. : )
Date: 4/10/2019 6:31:00 AM
Excellent poem with picturesque. Thank for sharing it.
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Date: 4/9/2019 6:40:00 PM
you as well Connie, thanks for the visit.
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Date: 4/9/2019 4:18:00 PM
I love the smell of lavender and this lovely piece brought it to mind.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/9/2019 5:45:00 PM
Thank you Richard. Lavender has so many uses. I use it to sleep and it is also great in essential oil form to keep burns from scaring and helps to heal. Have a lovely Easter. : ) xxoo
Date: 4/9/2019 2:41:00 PM
Great write Connie...Love the last stanza..
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Date: 4/9/2019 12:52:00 PM
The master poetess lights up the poetic skies...reflecting beauty and sunlight to fields of lavender...excellence in poetic form dear friend...happy easter endings Connie...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 4/8/2019 2:03:00 PM
Oh how absolutely gorgeous this is, Connie. I love every poetic line of your poem, whose beauty steals my breath away. Superb artistry and a big fav! Warmest wishes always my lovely friend.. ~Susan
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/9/2019 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for the fave and for your lovely comment. Easter blessings. xxoo
Date: 4/7/2019 7:38:00 PM
Can only imagine the scent on the breeze! Lovely, Connie!
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Date: 4/7/2019 3:06:00 PM
in answer to your question , Connie. I sure wish I DID live in Hawaii!!!
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Date: 4/7/2019 11:42:00 AM
Hi Connie, I love all your poems but I must fav. this - fields of lavender - nothing more beautiful! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/7/2019 3:42:00 PM
Lavender has so many medicinal properties and can be used in essential oil form for burns to keep them from scaring. Thank you so much for the fave and your lovely comment. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Date: 4/6/2019 8:18:00 AM
wow... picturesque, excellent.
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Date: 4/6/2019 7:32:00 AM
Excellent write.. beautiful imagery :)
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Date: 4/6/2019 4:42:00 AM
Your poems floats to the top Connie, and your beauty feels tangible . Thank you for sharing, have a blessed day dear friend. xo
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Date: 4/5/2019 10:15:00 PM
Lovely write Connie, well done...
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Date: 4/5/2019 3:39:00 PM
great comparison Lavender and the women.
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Date: 4/5/2019 12:22:00 PM
And tangible they are...a nice weave a poetry...enjoyed the potion...
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Date: 4/5/2019 11:51:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Connie. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Lovely write.
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Date: 4/4/2019 5:39:00 AM
Excellent poetry, touches the soul, Connie:)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/4/2019 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Jo. I hope you have a splendid Easter. xxoo
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