Favorite Chip Wagon

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Welcoming red and white canopy
Picnic tables and parasols
Blazing cheerful tunes
Big smile
Warm hello
Fine how do you do
Cheeseburgers
Poutine and hotdogs
Hamburgers and fries
Pop then ice cream
To tickle your nostrils
Tease your palate
And taunt your bellies

Late October sunny day, closing up shop
Last chance for fries, burger and a pop



AP: 3rd place 2021

Submitted on October 19, 2017 for contest THE SOUNDS OF THE PAST sponsored by Eve Roper

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/19/2017 7:16:00 PM

I hate when they close for winter but come the spring yum again. Well written.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/19/2017 8:09:00 PM

Thanks Patricia. Let's hope for a short winter !!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/19/2017 8:09:00 PM

Thanks Patricia. Let's hope for a short winter !!