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We Should Fly Away

Together, we should fly away – leave behind our average day Let’s break from mundane routine – inhale exciting to exhale serene Our daily sameness lacks changes ~ let’s peak inside spontaneous exchanges Imagine waking to momentaneous outcomes ~ shaking time’s ill-dosed humdrums
Not knowing life’s daily sum would defuse our everyday numb!
... CayCay April 1, 2019

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Date: 5/30/2019 8:26:00 AM
I agree with Susan, love the inhale exciting and exhale serene. Great rhymes Cay Cay, your talent shines bright with this offering, belated congrats on your win!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/30/2019 10:02:00 AM
Three visits makes me a lucky girl. Thank you, John, for spending so much time with me. Though you didn't hit my pen for holding back the tears, I am visit sated! What a feel. Be golden ... CayCay
Date: 4/19/2019 9:17:00 PM
Such an inspiring poem, CayCay, I especially loved; 'inhale exciting to exhale serene'.. a verse so filled with uplifting emotion. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/18/2019 10:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/17/2019 2:06:00 PM
Yay! I am very happy to see this be a top winner CayCay. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 4/2/2019 8:45:00 PM
You have supremely summed up what reading poetry here at Poetry Soup does for me. I loved this CayCay! It is sure to place high. xxoo : )
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Date: 4/2/2019 3:45:00 PM
Love this,caycay. Everyone is doing great with this one. you should see the corn ball thing I wrote. I am rethinking things. I thought up another topic I want to do for Laura's contest (if there is time) and I will take my corny poem and redo it for Nina' quirky contest probably (it was about a pet peeve of mine). Well, sweetie. I'm out of here!!
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Date: 4/1/2019 6:58:00 PM
You've got yourself a top win here, CayCay with this delightful verse - great luck in the contest - BoB
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