Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Faux-Fur

Sans seed - it’s not Spring now - green grass concealed.
Cute, cuddly happiness with floppy ears.
White rabbits leap, in the fluffy snow field,
when the zephyr and flower disappears.

Plush wings that sink into the angel-snow.
Flapping in the thirst-quenching cold, faux-fur
envelopes limbs with a diamond glow.
Flurries dash from above, brighten dark fir.

Buried halfway - barrow and bicycles,
shrubs and bushes, and children of small size.
Melting ice reshapes into icicles -
nature’s decoration delights the eyes.

1/17/2023
12 Lines of Rhyme - Winter Nature Themed
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Len Gasun February 5, 2023 at 3:35 AM A mesmerizing imagery of winter this is my dear friend Kim. I wish we've winter here even once. Congratulations on your win and this stellar write! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2023 at 5:45 AM God bless you too, Len! Thank you so much!

Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 10:21 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. Cold days need a cup of hot chocolate. Have a great day.............. Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2023 at 5:45 AM Hot chocolate or coffee ;) One for me, one for my grand. Stay warm, Paula. Thank you!

Linda Alice Fowler January 25, 2023 at 6:35 AM Back with big congratulations on your win Kim! :) Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2023 at 5:46 AM Thank you, Linda!

Tania Kitchin January 24, 2023 at 6:29 PM Kim, sweet imagery in this one, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest! Kim Rodrigues January 24, 2023 at 9:05 PM Thank you, Tania! :)

Jenna Logan January 18, 2023 at 9:12 AM Looking forward to bunnies and blooms. Cute lines, Kim. Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2023 at 12:43 PM Yes! Thank you, Jenna!

Caren Krutsinger January 18, 2023 at 2:27 AM What a terrific optimistic poem! Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2023 at 12:43 PM Thank you, Caren!

Gershon Wolf January 17, 2023 at 7:50 PM Pretty picture here, Kim... and so glad I've only seen it once this Chicago 'winter' so far. Nicer to read about it in one of your poems!! Thanks, gw Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2023 at 8:23 PM Thank you, Gershon!

Linda Alice Fowler January 17, 2023 at 9:10 AM "buried halfway...children of small size." Quite the picture Kim - a visual stimulation indeed! I like it. :) Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2023 at 10:11 AM Thank you, Linda! Appreciate you!

Sotto Poet January 17, 2023 at 7:03 AM This is really beautiful, Kim! Excellent use of imagery, as well as lyrical expression. I enjoyed reading it today Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2023 at 7:54 AM Thank you so much, dear friend!

Vijay Pandit January 17, 2023 at 6:16 AM Excellent imagery throughout, Kim. Beautiful winter hues your poem paints. Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2023 at 7:54 AM Thank you, Vijay! I appreciate you! :)

Joseph P. DiMino January 17, 2023 at 5:39 AM Delightful! Great imagery and poetic expression. Love it! Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2023 at 5:42 AM Thanks so much, Joe!