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Feasting on burgers, chips, French fries, pizza, ice cream Fettuccine and pies Fills our bodies with fat. Fish, right oils and nuts are Fabulous for us, so Feed your face with good fats! 9/24/16 For the Pleiades F Poetry Contest of Kim Merryman

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/8/2016 12:15:00 PM

Thanks, mom for the nutritional advice. Nice and clever poetic device to deliver said message, Andrea. Concise and to the point. Good write. I'll take that extra slice if no one now wants it. Love and peace to you and yours.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/7/2016 3:10:00 AM

Coming back to read once again and congratulate you lovingly both on your win and in this fascinating pleiades poem my dear friend, Andrea! This form is really interesting I hope I can do some other letters on vacation. Thanks for reminding me. Congrats again! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/28/2016 3:30:00 PM

Hi Andrea, You penned a good write. I appreciate the info as well. Now I must put the "info" into action. Congratulations on your win.It was well deserved:-)Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/27/2016 8:48:00 AM

Great 'fatty' write:) congratulations, Andrea:)

James Inman

Date: 9/27/2016 7:03:00 AM

Nicely done Andrea, but I have to have my burgers and ice cream.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 3:19:00 AM

- Well deserved and well done, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Quigley

Date: 9/26/2016 9:06:00 PM

Congrats!

Joseph May

Date: 9/26/2016 7:09:00 PM

Very informative Andrea....Congrats on your win...

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 5:26:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/26/2016 4:58:00 PM

Andrea, I got hungry just reading this. And unfortunately, I didn't want the good stuff. Ha! A delicious write with some very good advice in your smooth flowing Pleiades! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Love, Kim

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/26/2016 4:40:00 PM

What an interesting subject - congrats on your placement, Andrea.

Janis Thompson

Date: 9/26/2016 4:18:00 PM

Makes me shame just reading this. I love french fries. Congratulations.

Jean Murray

Date: 9/26/2016 4:08:00 PM

Number three you and me! Well done.

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/26/2016 3:24:00 PM

Anything that tastes good is bad for you. I hope you are well. I try to eat apples everyday. Enjoyable little ode! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Len Gasun

Date: 9/26/2016 10:54:00 AM

Great piece and great advice my very dear friend, Andrea. I've also an entry in this contest but mine is family. Hope I did it right. Good luck in the contest! Hugs. Btw. I'm sorry for the late reply on the soupmail. I've overlooked it. My reply again to sm please. Thank you so much. Many hugs! love lots and praying for you, Leonora

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/26/2016 3:42:00 AM

Great advice...Will try to follow the this...Good luck with the contest...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/25/2016 9:16:00 PM

A 7 for this excellent piece, Andrea! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2016 4:49:00 AM

- Eat healthy all year round - Great done, Andrea - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/25/2016 1:53:00 AM

Ok, I admit your title drew me in-- Fats?! Only you, Andrea, only you! And you still manage to pull it off, informative and with those images to boot.... I only have a quick critique-- where's the coconut oil??? But shucks, the mention of burgers, pizza, french fries makes me crave them more! Enjoyed this-- uhhh geeky me- sees MYC in my captcha, and somehow, myocardial infarction (heart attack) pops to mind, more reason to stay away from the bad fats! catch up with you soon, sweetie!

Augustus Black

Date: 9/24/2016 9:01:00 PM

Lovely poem, giving knowledge of proper foods for our body. Eating everything to a limit is OK, but we should not go crazy, otherwise we will suffer. Nicely written.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/24/2016 4:22:00 PM

Looking at your photograph of foods I think great breakfast but then what can I eat for lunch and dinner not to mention snacks.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2016 4:27:00 PM

you have to do a lot of searching online. My new hobby, Armand, is finding tasty recipes that use good fat and other ingredients! Just wish I had the time to prepare the freaking stuff!

Jean Murray

Date: 9/24/2016 3:46:00 PM

After feasting on your poem, I'm satisfied.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/24/2016 3:29:00 PM

Good one, Andrea. So informative...I've been a vegetarian since my teens. Recently, I became vegan. It's helping me stay away from the bad fats. I've lost about 8 kilos and am struggling to lose more weight. This is a boost to my morale. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2016 4:28:00 PM

Congrats and good luck, Eileen. I lost 17 pounds in a year's time but struggle to lose more. I need to eat totally right. It's the little things like crackers with cheese dip that are messing me up!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2016 2:28:00 PM

Having just come back from a wedding reception and had 7 courses - yes really ... I feel fat and now I read your poem and I realise how much I have just consumed lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2016 4:28:00 PM

hahaha you need to suffer like ME