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The man screams : "Cursed be the woman who performs tattoos and the woman who asks to have it done" Chaotic emotions Tears in hers long black eyelashes Loss of patience and self-control Stainless sterile tattoo needles Particles of ink five fingers on the hand (two thumbs) Present and future Permanent ornament ... the eternal symbol "God's right hand" 19.10.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Fatima Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann 1st place in the contest

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Date: 12/3/2020 10:55:00 AM
Woah congrats on your top win on this sublime deep take on the Fatema contest. I like only temporary tattoos for myself but like to look at other people's permanent tattoos. Kudos!
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Date: 12/7/2020 3:42:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, S.zaynab :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/2/2020 11:39:00 AM
So creative Anne-Lise with depth to ponder. Wonderful choice of a theme based on a picture that keeps us thinking! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 12/7/2020 3:41:00 AM
- Sam, thank you very much for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/1/2020 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative way to write about Fatima. Enjoy your win and day with a hug.................
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Date: 12/7/2020 3:41:00 AM
- Thank you very much Paula, for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/30/2020 10:16:00 AM
Very nicely done Ann-Lise! :) Congratulations on the win! hugs {} Linda
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Date: 12/7/2020 3:40:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Linda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/30/2020 12:27:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 11/30/2020 2:20:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/29/2020 4:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your TOP WIN for an exquisitely excellent write
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Date: 11/29/2020 12:16:00 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/29/2020 4:20:00 AM
This is brilliant! So creative and insightful. A true pearl among the masses... Love it, sweet lady. God bless you and CONGRATS on your number one place
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Date: 11/29/2020 12:16:00 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/29/2020 3:46:00 AM
Big Congrats to win Top. Hugs.
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Date: 11/29/2020 12:15:00 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2020 10:29:00 AM
I think this Fatima tattoo is amazing and what peeked my curiosity is when I saw the evil eye at the bottom of the hand - the eternal symbol, "God's right hand" Good luck in the contest sis Sunshine Smile - this is a win, believe me! Hugs and blessings and love, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:01:00 AM
- A beautiful tattoo, but a little too big for my taste - Many thanks for the comments and wishes, dear sister :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2020 6:01:00 AM
Your take on the "Fatima" prompt is both expressive and creative, Anne-Lise. I have nothing against simple artistic tattoos...but covering a body all over does not appeal to me. Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:28:00 AM
- To cover the entire body is not for me ... but, some love it :) - Thanks for your great comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2020 4:33:00 AM
Great work!
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:25:00 AM
- Thank you for your comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2020 6:40:00 PM
This is different, and so good, love it, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:25:00 AM
- Thank you for your comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2020 3:02:00 PM
Such a fascinating interpretation, Anne-Lise!! Great use of vivid imagery and musical words!!
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:24:00 AM
- Thank you for your comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2020 1:20:00 PM
Love your interpretation of the fatima theme, - sharp ink indeed Anne Lise:-) I had needle phobia, have got over it but I still wouldn't have a tattoo:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:24:00 AM
- Thank you for your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2020 7:53:00 AM
I tried it once no more it hurts to much, lol this is a wonderful take on it Anne-Lise, GREAT JOB my friend!
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Date: 10/19/2020 9:58:00 AM
- I have one .. it did not hurt at all, Bobby :) - Thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2020 6:59:00 AM
Maybe I'm old fashioned but I do not like tattoos. Still a great poem. ~~
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Date: 10/19/2020 9:56:00 AM
- Tattoo is "old art" ... some like it others do not - Thanks for your comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2020 6:06:00 AM
That is quite an impressive work of art. I like your take on the contest, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/19/2020 9:54:00 AM
- Some are skilled and beautiful works of art, Vijay ... others can be ugly - Thank you for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2020 5:57:00 AM
Sometimes tattoos look nice, but some people over do it.. however, it is their body and they are free to do as they please.... great idea for this contest..
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Date: 10/19/2020 9:51:00 AM
- Yes, some go far beyond what I like ... look almost like they do not need clothes :))) - Thanks for your comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2020 5:34:00 AM
Ive heard it can be painful, they've never appealed to me, used to know someone who was covered in them. Would have looked nice on my wall lol. Have a good week Anne. Tom
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Date: 10/19/2020 9:49:00 AM
- It depends on where the tattoo is on the body, thick or thin skin :) - Many are truly works of art :) - Thanks for your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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