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Fatima

Shining like the sun -

whether it be the virgin

in children’s visions

or the mother of one’s soul . . .

she blazes perfection’s path


Nov. 1, 2020 for the Fatima Contest of  Kai Michael Neumann

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/1/2020 7:17:00 AM Congratulations on the win. Few words with much said. A very creative and beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day............. Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 11/30/2020 10:21:00 AM Nicely penned Andrea. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 11/30/2020 12:33:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end, honouring a lady or woman, doing her best in her given role. God bless you. Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 11/29/2020 6:16:00 PM Congratulations for your podium win with Kai! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/29/2020 11:14:00 AM - Congratulations on your win in the Fatima contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Newton Ranaweera Date: 11/29/2020 7:11:00 AM Congratulations on your placement, Andrea!! Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 11/6/2020 5:08:00 PM Superb Tanka Andrea... Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/5/2020 7:30:00 PM Nicely done, Andrea! Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 11/4/2020 3:57:00 PM Beautifully done, Andrea! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/4/2020 10:43:00 AM A beautiful poem Andrea - perfect, creative - 'she blazes perfections path' she certainly does 'whether it be the virgin or the mother of one's sou' - definitely a fave for me my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/4/2020 4:01:00 AM Reads like a good contender. Way to go. I think the bright light was Another. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/4/2020 1:20:00 AM Nice and neat, Andrea:) Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 11/3/2020 4:18:00 AM Ah, so beautifully done. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/2/2020 10:45:00 AM A beautiful tanka, Andrea. People ask why I put up blue lights for Christmas. It's is to honor Mother Mary, who is usually pictured in blue robes. Surely this will be a winner in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/2/2020 5:46:00 AM Very nicely penned Andrea, winning wishes Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/1/2020 11:34:00 PM Great tanka. I wonder how many know what happened in Fatima really. ~~ Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 11/1/2020 10:53:00 PM Love this Andrea, especially the juxtaposition. Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 11/1/2020 9:51:00 PM Nicely done, Andrea. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/1/2020 1:55:00 PM Your tanka shines, Andrea, just like the one who blazes perfection's path. Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 11/1/2020 11:36:00 AM An excellent tanka.. Login to Reply