Fatima

Shining like the sun - whether it be the virgin in children’s visions or the mother of one’s soul . . . she blazes perfection’s path Nov. 1, 2020 for the Fatima Contest of Kai Michael Neumann

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/1/2020 7:17:00 AM

Congratulations on the win. Few words with much said. A very creative and beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day.............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/30/2020 10:21:00 AM

Nicely penned Andrea. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/30/2020 12:33:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end, honouring a lady or woman, doing her best in her given role. God bless you.

John Watt

Date: 11/29/2020 6:16:00 PM

Congratulations for your podium win with Kai!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2020 11:14:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Fatima contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 11/29/2020 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Andrea!!

Michael Tor

Date: 11/6/2020 5:08:00 PM

Superb Tanka Andrea...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/5/2020 7:30:00 PM

Nicely done, Andrea!

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/4/2020 3:57:00 PM

Beautifully done, Andrea!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/4/2020 10:43:00 AM

A beautiful poem Andrea - perfect, creative - 'she blazes perfections path' she certainly does 'whether it be the virgin or the mother of one's sou' - definitely a fave for me my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2020 4:01:00 AM

Reads like a good contender. Way to go. I think the bright light was Another. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/4/2020 1:20:00 AM

Nice and neat, Andrea:)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/3/2020 4:18:00 AM

Ah, so beautifully done.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/2/2020 10:45:00 AM

A beautiful tanka, Andrea. People ask why I put up blue lights for Christmas. It's is to honor Mother Mary, who is usually pictured in blue robes. Surely this will be a winner in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn