Father

Written: May 30th, 2026, for a contest sponsored by: Silent One Quote: "My mother was destiny. My father, grace." By Rumi ************************** He was no eidolon, but a telluric force keeping his grounding on, never veering off course. Yet restless as cabotage winds across oceans, carried the world in his motions. His laugh—obstreperous and wild, a gale where rafters rattled, Yet his taciturn silence, deep and mild, calmed the miasma where doubt battled. Clumsy of tenderness, devout, learned late how to cradle. His heavy hands, like a broad ladle, became limpid, flowing rivers, guiding me past venal mirrors, and maelstroms meant to wither. A ragamuffin teacher, pugnacious with life’s features, fustigated blatherskite shudders, turning them into golden treasure. Coins of courage for the dreamer, minted in the furnace of his gaze. In the penumbra of his presence, a shudder rippled at vain sight— the void held its equanimous essence, a reverent tremor of sublime light. Whispering secrets of the sunken stars' vicinity, veiled within the ideology of his scars' trinity. He was besotted with love, austerely self-denying as he drove. An erudite cartographer—a heart of dove tracing the ancestral cradle, arched above By the iron of peace, and velvet glove. Carving a haven from havoc, and a grove. Dear Father— my zeitgeber, my grimoire of guidance, my incarnadine horizon. Even now, your mellowness lingers. A tenderness— sardonic, stretching into the infinite.
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Guptar Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your first place win in this contest with an exceptional poem to your beloved father, as usual revealing a masterly diction, choice of words and depth of thoughts and feelings. Hats both to you and your father. W7ishing you a blessed day.
Carmack Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 8:48 PM
I enjoy the depth and range of your vocabulary. Loved the whole poem, but especailly the 3rd and 5th stanzas. Congrats on your win.
One Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 1:55 PM
There are some wonderful lines through your poem...and some interesting choices of words like zeitgeber and ragamuffin... You have described your father in a metaphorical way... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Legros Kelley Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 4:46 AM
You have very beautifully honored your father in this majestic work of absolute beauty, Sotto. He would also be honored, I am certain, by the man his son has become, in the genre of beloved poets, your works of brilliance shine like stars.
George Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 8:15 PM
He must have been great. I can rightly say that you inherited his genes. A father or mother lives on in the hearts of the children if he/she guided them through the right track. He must be happy to see from heaven, his son juggling with words and creating magic.
Rolland Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 6:21 PM
a clever and deep tribute, with "special" ? vocabulary, this is a jewel, made me happy to think to my father, will write some soon enjoy your Sunday poet
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 4:36 PM
A wonderful tribute to your father with Father's Day coming up in a few weeks. Dads are a special group of people who need a day for just them to be honored. Thank you for sharing this one with us. if for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 3:07 PM
Gosh. He sounds too amazing for words. Wish I could say the same if mine. A glowing tribute here for your father
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