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Fate's Rainy Rebirth

The rain pelted around me and washed away my purity Leaving me bared, exposed in my femininity Now, instead of puzzling over my reclusion, The whole world shall gape at my vulnerability! Why, if only I could just die out of combustion I would have saved myself from this ruination Always had I been rapturously involved with faith How am I to live when deprived from its elation! But then, life forced itself into my breath Pray, it said, love when true and pure is my strength Meant it is, to be celebrated as a boon of mercy Fight not, let the rain guide you into a most exalted rebirth! 3 July 2017

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Date: 2/19/2018 10:32:00 PM
My dear friend, You have tremendous talent but the beauty if a Rubai is in its simplicity. ( A Rubai is a quatrain that everything must start and finish within the 4 lines. It is a 4 line book)also its meter (syllables) must be same in every line. Check the Rubaiyat Omar Khayyam ......https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-rubaiyat-of-omar-khayyam/
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