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Fate's Occasion

Singular and thus finite begins the spiral's spinning plight of eminent foretold collision love commences in a vision Unbeknownst before the time an effigy that burns the mind now filters clear, emotions raw, the present image striking awe Eyes and hair on perfect face with pouted mouth, the heart doth race into the thoughts, how to proceed? laggardly? ...with godly speed? Clumsily one gathers poise do thine drums work? there is no noise at the point, this cosmic stead a vocal soul must forge ahead Words abashed but striking through perceived by them, return to you is that a chorus sounding there? without belief just simper stare Lives become one single strand as two entangle by the hand joy begins to warmly swell for fate's occasion, two hearts fell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/11/2013 1:41:00 PM
Tugs at the heart strings and draws you in Beautiful work deep
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/12/2013 12:12:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment!
Date: 9/10/2013 8:03:00 PM
Perfectly crafted verses and imagery. Stunning write :)
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/11/2013 7:19:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 9/10/2013 10:50:00 AM
This is really spectacular. I'm jealous of just about every single line in this piece' jealous that I didn't think of them! I've told others here that when I read a poem that I wish I had written, it means that it's excellent; beyond excellent. Absolutely fantastic work, Samuel; this is going into my faves for sure! :)
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/11/2013 7:17:00 AM
Thanks so much for the compliment! I worry about the older vocabulary, but it feels right here.
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/10/2013 10:51:00 AM
lol sorry, should be a semi-colon after "piece" ;)

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