Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

Fate or Hate

Written: December 03, 2023
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It is either life or death
But there is also controversy
Within the boundless
Accrual occurs as well
There is either love or hate
Just...hostility
Who might control it?
Is verity
One can be either first or last.

There is only a disparity
And who would be in charge?
assists the vast majority
There is both space and time
Only drowsiness in between
Things are wild and free
Have vastness.

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Miranda Hawley December 3, 2023 at 1:52 PM The struggle between good and evil is timeless and endless, this side of heaven at least. And in this vast universe, opposites are everywhere. Great message by the way.

Andrea Dietrich December 3, 2023 at 12:38 PM What a great end line. Have vastness. A profound write here

Silent One December 3, 2023 at 12:34 PM a profound poem with a deep message, i am not sure how fate and hate can be two opposite options though... we should always try to be in control of our live, but it can be difficult just like our emotions..

Hiya Sharma December 3, 2023 at 9:20 AM Oh this is quite an introspective and insightful piece.. With so many philosophical tones layered between wise phraseology, as always. This certainly compelled me to read it twice in order to fathom its poetic richness and meanings.. Truly, a profound write, dear Sotto.. "There is both space and time Only drowsiness in between" Living in vastness holds higher depth.. Making the best of memories in every moment whilst we don't get stuck in the strict edges.. Brilliantly crafted this is!

Ink Empress December 3, 2023 at 9:03 AM Im literally going through drowsiness right now dr poet, hah,so that line resonates although you didnt mean it in that way. This is such a profound write with a touch of philosophy in it, and one that would get readers to ponder upon. Definitely made me think and i agree, with the message you’ve passed on. Why not give freely too, live wholeheartedly while you can, a poem that i would read maybe more than twice and decipher deeper meanings. Pleasure reading.and you do free verse very well too