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Fate of the Moon

No moment ever felt this peaceful, Like the one I'd often meet. Almost daily, Sun and Moon's impossible meet. When you, like the Sun, were so bright, And I, like the Moon, craved your light. My presence was incomplete without yours. But for one thing! Moon only needed Sun's light in darkness, But I wanted yours in every light. Like the fate of Sun and Moon, we're destined apart, I need you, yet we're lost in the same heartbreaking sky, And our paths can never align.

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Date: 4/30/2025 11:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/26/2025 5:27:00 PM
Very beautiful poem- forces of the Universe, colliding and leaving, heart's ache
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