Fate of Horizons

The chariot carries the star
   to the fate of horizons

and embellishes the clouds
   with amber and violet whisps,

rendering my thoughts of you
    to the holiest joy

and
    contentment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 8, 2016 at 1:20 AM
ian bravestone, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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November 30, 2010 at 8:58 PM
Thank you for the welcome! I hope to take some time to read through your boards and comment as much as possible.
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November 30, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and full of sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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November 30, 2010 at 4:04 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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