Fate

I am the ever shifting sand The unreadable truth Ever constant, ever changing I know all that is past and all that is yet to come You are not the same as all the rest Travel your own path Trace that singular destiny Your fate is as yet undecided One day you may prove yourself Should the gods be willing

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Ned Flanders

Date: 5/24/2011 1:51:00 PM

Mmm.. you say you are the ever shifting sand..right.. an unreadable truth...right.. you know the past and the present..right.. but i am not the same but must follow my own destiny..Mmm.. my fate is undecided but i must prove myself.. Unless i have got this wrong you must be God.. should i then be Jesus? And if so should not the last line state... "Should God be willing." Just wondered.. enjoyed. Cheers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2010 9:26:00 PM

Amazing, Nick. Time to add a new fav poet to my list. LUv, Andrea

Skat A

Date: 4/28/2010 4:35:00 AM

Enjoyed, well said the deepest write are the best,,irma

Amy Green

Date: 4/28/2010 4:13:00 AM

Nice, like this one a lot.