Fate

torture and pleasure
giving and taking
so many hopes
but fate can tear it away
don't get too close
don't become attached
fate can steal it all away
leaving you bloody
leaving you broken
don't love too deeply
don't love so truly
fate will take it all
and others will deny it all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 27, 2009 at 12:04 PM
I am feeling the same exact way right now. A very good poem and lots of emotion that I can see. Others may deny the truth but, I know what it feels like to know it and have everyone think that your crazy. Never give up on the truth thoughbecause when we are alone. We are the only ones that we can count on...
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