Fate

prophecy said love awaits sunrise ~ alas, dawn rose shrouded in clouds August 26, 2020 Placed 2nd: When plans don’t go to plan poetry contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Valsa George

Date: 4/11/2022 8:49:00 AM

I see the beauty of brevity in this wonderful Monoku ! What's expected hardly happens !

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/3/2020 12:53:00 PM

It's sunny here today. :) I love this Monoku! Congratulations on your win. Peace, Angie

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/5/2020 9:39:00 AM

Incredible piece, well penned.

John Fleming

Date: 9/4/2020 10:52:00 AM

Glad I read this, Vijay...absolutely beautiful...it really is. Superbly penned!! My very best regards as always! :) john P.s if I had been judging...then this would have received a 1st place.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2020 2:40:00 PM

You deserve better than that, my friend! Soon those clouds will be swept away by a friendly wind:) Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/1/2020 10:13:00 AM

Congratulations dear Vijay on your win in this contest - as always a Monoku with great imagination, if it just wasn 't for those clouds that spoilt the moment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/1/2020 3:39:00 AM

Congratulations Vijay. Well done! :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/30/2020 5:45:00 PM

CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Vijay. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2020 2:27:00 PM

so poetically expressed and one of the best! Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2020 1:08:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Vijay :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/29/2020 12:22:00 PM

Compelling and beautiful, congratulations on your win!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/29/2020 11:23:00 AM

Darn clouds! Hopefully they will clear tomorrow! Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/29/2020 10:44:00 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Vijay. Congratulations on your win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/29/2020 6:30:00 AM

What a sad fate. Says much. Congratulations!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/29/2020 4:33:00 AM

very poetic ~ well penned, Vijay ~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2020 4:23:00 AM

Oh, how sad to awake and find cloudy skies. Love will find its way to you, Vijay. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/29/2020 4:01:00 AM

What a wonderful Monoku! Well thought out. Congrats on your win!

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 2:50:00 AM

Even prophecy was not true... damn! Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/27/2020 8:59:00 AM

Love always needs sunlight to grow, well done dear Vijay, what a luminous line.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2020 5:12:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate, Vienna.

V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 6:17:00 AM

Anticipation fails most of the times Vijay sir.. Such a sad line.. My best wishes to you in the contest. Keep inspiring.Take care.Have a lovely day.:-) Warm regards sent to you.:-)

V. Deepa
Date: 9/3/2020 5:33:00 AM

Back to you with my congratulations dear Vijay sir:-)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2020 5:12:00 AM

Thank you Deepa--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/26/2020 8:21:00 PM

Clouds covered the sunshine. Yes, it happens sometimes. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This is so beautifully written and presented. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2020 4:56:00 AM

Always a pleasure to read your comments my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks Brandy.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/26/2020 8:45:00 AM

In one wonderful line you have interpreted the unpredictability of fate.. the complexity of a world in motion in which man is striving to be.. A great Monoku, dear Vijay! A great mastery of forms of poetry! The best of luck in the contest! Best regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2020 9:53:00 AM

Thank you Besma--much appreciate your kind remarks.