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Fate-Dreaming, Dream-Waiting

In my youth, sometimes walking down the street, I daydreamed,
fantasizing  all the thrills fate had in store for me.
Reveries of romance became reality for such unbelievably short time
at last I tossed those foolish daydreams to the side!

What good were they? It seems to me, we’re dealt
fate’s hand, whatever it may be. Now as I grow older (wiser?)
I know where wishful thinking gets me. Old reveries have died.
I wonder now if it’s too late to wait again for fate to realize new dreams!


July 3, 2018 for Silent One's Eight Lines Of Fate, When You Wonder If It Is Too Late Poetry Contest

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2018

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Eve Roper Date: 7/21/2018 11:27:00 PM Back with congratulations on your win. Well done! Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 7/21/2018 10:57:00 PM Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your podium finish. Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 7/21/2018 4:12:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Imagination, dreams, everything forms our creativity. Enjoyed this! Login to Reply

Curtis Moorman Date: 7/20/2018 1:36:00 PM Andrea, what an honor to share a winning place with the greatest poet on Soup! Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 7/20/2018 12:27:00 AM Congratulatuons, Andrea on your win. "I wonder now if it’s too late to wait again for fate to realize new dreams"...great line, optimism always wins. Login to Reply

Faraz Ajmal Date: 7/19/2018 2:34:00 PM I really enjoyed reading your wonderful poem and especially the message behind it, you see that being a child I saw some perfect dreams, a perfect life, with a perfect job, but since I am growing older, I can see that dreams fading away, with each and every day, no matter I much I tried, the difficult thing is not to see dreams, but to fulfill them and what more difficult is when your dream is broken, then seeing a new dream anyway many congratulations on your win in the contest , good luck Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2018 7:39:00 AM - Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 7/19/2018 7:37:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/13/2018 5:19:00 AM Dreams lead to poetry for us poets Andrea and an active dreamer writes lots of poetry as you do! Sweet dreams, I am headed to bed. I enjoyed reading this before retiring. xxoo Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 7/12/2018 5:17:00 PM I can't help but have this make me think that it is important to know when you are actually living parts of your dreams. Those little God winks so to speak. :) Have a nice day living in the present. :) Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/13/2018 7:03:00 PM Yes, Robert, there is indeed something on my horizon and I am waiting for it to come to fruition!

Eve Roper Date: 7/4/2018 2:27:00 PM I love an insight into your past, Andrea..Good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 7/4/2018 11:00:00 AM Oh love this looking into your day dreams, your poetry Andrea, does seem to bring one closer, in that, different culture,country, so many poets on here, with the same outlook towards life, and having lived it...All in all your poems speak so many languages, yet the same theme. there would be no wars, if everyone listened. Login to Reply Robert Johnson Date: 7/12/2018 5:18:00 PM Yes he does Andrea. Good on ya Harry. :) Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/5/2018 3:21:00 PM You always say the loveliest things.

Matthew Anish Date: 7/4/2018 8:46:00 AM Reveries can lead to realities. It is never too late to dream. I am on the mend. Thanks for your concern! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

John Gondolf Date: 7/4/2018 7:11:00 AM As long as we have daydreams we have hope in our heart. Nicely written Andrea, best of luck. John Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 7/3/2018 10:56:00 PM It's wonderful... You ask these questions... Many ask today...just because things didn't work their way... I still believe one should never give up... All the best Andrea... Nice to read you Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 7/3/2018 9:03:00 PM Brilliant write, bravo. I haven’t been around for awhile. Just posted a poem. I am trying a new style. Looking forward to your opinion. Yours is a fav for me. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/3/2018 4:54:00 PM Never too late for dreams..Hope you pursue them, Andrea. Far reaching thoughts, beautifully expressed..wishing you a BIG win. Login to Reply

Chris Hagy Date: 7/3/2018 4:25:00 PM I love this Andrea :)...I can surely relate!...although my dreams when I was young were to be on stage, and to have a horse who would come to my call...had those come and go already...time for new dreams as you say so well here! Nothing new for me, just visiting today...have a good one :) Login to Reply