Fatally Written

All is not fatally written;
though no one leaves
the positive alive – I mean, 
ink dries and paper becomes
wrinkled and brittle...as those relationships
we wish to youthfully revive – but we are born dying –

let’s face it…

                        and despite the fact
that earth’s seasons wither then
restore, there is an under-toe
drawing us toward the sun...

the flip-side of awakening. 

One consolation is, I have been drenched
by Divine Light – far more brilliant
and powerful than any Hydrogen Furnace – 

yet, there was no pain and suffering –

only profound, comforting love….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/7/2020 10:11:00 AM
You know, I relate well to this Joe, An excellent write. Pangie. Xx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/8/2020 11:59:00 AM
Hi Pangie; thank you. So pleased you could relate to this one. Have beautiful day my friend!!
Date: 8/4/2020 5:39:00 PM
Right!! If and when one ever feels pain, then consider the Source! Hurrah! :) gw
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/5/2020 9:59:00 AM
Great comment! Thank you, Gershon.
Date: 8/2/2020 9:37:00 AM
Remarkable and utterly convincing personal statement of belief based on experience, made all the more effective by your creative use of words. I am as always, impressed by your writing, Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/2/2020 9:00:00 PM
Yep -- really did happen to me. It was quite a mystical experience. I was never the same afterwards. Thank you my friend. Have a great day!
Date: 8/1/2020 1:43:00 PM
You make a valid point...Talk about th sad state of affairs, but then turn it into a positive through your own personal faith.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/2/2020 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, Si; Personal Faith. I will sit down and write a little more about that. Blessings my friend!
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