Fatal Widow's Lair

A  beat of my hungry passion draws you
To  me.  And I wait for this slow approach,
Excited…darkness on camouflage of grass
My limbs attract,entrap... now a quick dance begins,
And I devour your crown through firm motion
Ending this pleasure with a deathly adieu,
While ovules scatter on wet ground, my seedlings
Growing in the vapor of nightfall’s circle…
I become a widow again, praying for other mates
Till eve’s desire enthralls more consorts to my lair,

An instinct borne from Nature's law of entrapment.

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Contest, Praying Mantis for Anthony Slausen
8/19/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 9/17/2016 12:57:00 PM
I really loved your entry Nette. This would have been higher on my list. Congratulations on your fifth placement! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:32:00 PM
So now every time I see my mate praying I shall stay alert and awake....and away. Beautifully written and evocative Nette. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette! A deadly dance!
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Date: 8/19/2016 11:16:00 PM
I was just about..... to ask you for your phone number.......... LOL :) Loved this!
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Date: 8/19/2016 7:33:00 AM
How tragically true! How unavoidable Mantis ways are! Impressive writing! A 7 dear, nette! Hugs!
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Date: 8/19/2016 6:28:00 AM
Descriptive, dangerous liaisons in nature's world. A pleasure to read this excellent verse!
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Date: 8/18/2016 10:25:00 PM
Cringing at the thought Nette. You manage to shock with your vivid visceral imagery! Outstanding! ; ) 7
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Date: 8/18/2016 4:11:00 PM
Which to trust, this praying woman or her counterpart, the black widow. I'll stick to madame butterfly and your top-of the-shelf poem!
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Date: 8/18/2016 3:39:00 PM
The soft, stinging bite of this immense poem really got me. Personification makes it even more original!
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