Fat Moon

She blocks out the sun it's as plain as that
A total eclipse with infinite fat
The darkness comes at noon
That's when we see her moon
Her mom has made me as blind as a bat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 9:59 AM
Great chuckle, Larry. Nice going. Ralph
Wilson Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:39 PM
very funny Larry!Take care~Deb
Roberts Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:46 PM
you have such a creative ( and slightly cruel) streak
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