Fast, Fast, It's All Just Too Fast
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Fast, fast, it’s all way to fast,
The rain drops keep falling from the sky.
They all fall real fast, smashing the roof,
Leaving me to ponder just why.
Everything’s fast: nights, mornings, and days,
In my eyes and my ears and my brain.
Every thought that I have is fleeting away,
Fleeting like a little ghost train.
My thought’s in a train speeding at night,
In silence with the rain of my soul.
Where everything’s fast in chaos and funk,
And my conscience has gone for a stroll.
It’s just fast, too fast, this rain from the sky,
Too fast for my little mind.
I try to be nice but these thoughts never stay,
They leave me here still standing behind.
Copyright © Lewis Raynes | Year Posted 2016
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