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Fast Convertible

fast convertible hair to the wind fleeting summer rays submitted on June 2, 2020 for contest FRESH HAIKU sponsored by JCB BURL - HONORABLE MENTION

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L. J. Carber

Date: 6/7/2020 11:04:00 AM

very cool for this car lover! would have placed it higher, myself, as it so well and haiku-like catches the moment....

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/7/2020 11:42:00 AM

Thank, LJ. Most appreciated.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/6/2020 12:51:00 PM

This is refreshing and witty. Congratulations on your win Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/6/2020 1:49:00 PM

thank you ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/2/2020 8:07:00 PM

Petal to the metal too… Brings back the memories --- someone else's. Ha, ha. Never had a convertible. My toupe was too embarrassed. lol. ~ gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/2/2020 11:51:00 PM

Bad scene for a toupe ~