Fast Convertible

fast convertible
hair to the wind
fleeting summer rays



AP: 2nd place 2026
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Submitted on June 2, 2020 for contest FRESH HAIKU sponsored by JCB BURL  -  HONORABLE MENTION
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Carber Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 11:04 AM
very cool for this car lover! would have placed it higher, myself, as it so well and haiku-like catches the moment....
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 11:42 AM
Thank, LJ. Most appreciated.
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 12:51 PM
This is refreshing and witty. Congratulations on your win Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:49 PM
thank you ~
Wolf Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 8:07 PM
Petal to the metal too… Brings back the memories --- someone else's. Ha, ha. Never had a convertible. My toupe was too embarrassed. lol. ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 11:51 PM
Bad scene for a toupe ~
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