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Fashionably Deadly

Movie star eyes Perfect caramel skin Screech. That would be too perfect. Change that to something pastier Alabaster maybe The monster in the mirror Smiled with her green eyes Vivian Leigh maybe? She watched her face transform But she added the caramel And she looked more like Sophia Loren Maybe brown eyes? She suggested The magic mirror was losing patience Make up your mind it said. Did it really matter What you look like When you lure a man to his death? The mirror’s grin widened. She patted her auburn curls in place And picked up her cape. She was ready for the hunt. Written: November 27, 2019 Contest: Favorite Poem from November 2019 Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/9/2019 7:54:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD, Caren. An exciting write.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/9/2019 9:38:00 AM

Thank you Line. I was pleasantly surprised.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/3/2019 8:20:00 AM

Wow so sorry I missed this but my phone has been down for past three days congrats tho I This amazing write and your potd!;)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/4/2019 12:27:00 AM

I was excited to see this - a day late myself!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/2/2019 9:16:00 PM

Trixie is in fine form with this imaginative write, Caren! Congrats on POTD! Warm wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/4/2019 12:27:00 AM

Thank you. I was truly honored.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/1/2019 7:55:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD Caren. I enjoyed reading this poem with your intriguing ending. xxoo

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2019 8:52:00 AM

Thank you Connie. It was the one day I did not feel like sitting, so I did not look at the computer. Sheesh!

David Mchattie

Date: 11/30/2019 4:58:00 PM

Nicely done my friend. A true gem indeed. Have a great day,

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2019 8:41:00 AM

You too David!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/30/2019 1:51:00 PM

I knew this was going to be a winner! Congratulations my friend on POTD - - I loved this write. Hugs and blessings,

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2019 8:41:00 AM

Man. When did this happen? I did not even know! What? I am so sad I missed this!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/30/2019 1:05:00 PM

Ouch!!! Sounds like many in the World. Trying to be someone they are not. Which is the wrong Attitude to have. To be liked, first you should like who You are. To trap someone, for the sake of saying you can. Wow!!! Not a nice thing to do at all. Congratulations Caren, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2019 8:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Brandy. I am gobsmacked!

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/30/2019 11:25:00 AM

To be Slayed by curls and cape...matters...Congratulations Caren on POTD

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2019 8:42:00 AM

Wow! Amazing! I am truly glad to know.

Na Na

Date: 11/30/2019 10:55:00 AM

Congrats Caren on getting POTD

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2019 8:42:00 AM

Thank you Gregory.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/30/2019 10:36:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this funny verse. Congratulations on POTD

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/30/2019 9:27:00 AM

This is awesome :)))))What a trip! Congratulations on POTD Caren! xomo

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2019 8:43:00 AM

Thank you Maureen!

John Gondolf

Date: 11/30/2019 9:26:00 AM

A feline out to hunt her prey. Congrats on POTD, Caren, nicely penned. John

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2019 8:43:00 AM

Thank you John!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/30/2019 8:33:00 AM

Nice one. Congratulations on POTD. Kind wishes, Kai

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2019 8:43:00 AM

Thank you Kai!

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 11/30/2019 8:13:00 AM

Love the alabaster skin...lol love love love this story. She seems too cool though, her mission too perfect, something's got to give...perhaps a sequel? Congrats Krutsinger. LLBx

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2019 8:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Lady Labyrinth!