Fashion Rage Tm

Boy told mom name brand he wanted to wear 
Gucci, Tommy Hilfiger, Nike air 
They are all the fashion rage. 
When you earn a hefty wage 
Wal-Mart breeches and shirt is what we'll spare.

12/24/2020

Trademark~~Quintain Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick

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Thomas Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Lol no way in the world would I pay for Gucci! Not for me and ESPECIALLY not for a child! I don't even take the Gucci bag I was given as a gift out of the closet! How are you feeling Eve?
Goldsmith Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 3:23 PM
Congratulations on your win. A smart mom. Love your line, "When you earn a hefty wage." Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings..........
Kendrick Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Life can be hard for those who's income won't let them purchase the name brands but non name brand work just a well sometimes fit better. Sometimes children can put some pressure on their parents and if they give in, then it could mean financial disaster. Thank you for participating in my contest. Sara
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December 28, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Good one, Eve! Janice
Devonshire Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 12:15 PM
Young people are so obsessed with the brands you mentioned, Eve. I don't know how parents can afford to buy them. There are some online brands I like more and they're more affordable. Great entry for Sara's fun contest. Wishing you the best in the contest and in the coming year. Carolyn
Proxenos Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Hi Eve, Glad common sense took over - hope you had an awesome Christmas day today. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Leffanta Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 11:24 AM
What worked for Adam works fine for me! Aloha! Rico
Michael Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 5:20 AM
Wise words, especially in these times...Merry Christmas to you and yours...
Buhagiar Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 2:11 AM
I never bother with fashion. ~~
Wolf Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 9:29 PM
Ha, ha! I see that your limericks are really coming along, Eve! Pretty soon you'll be too big for WalMart britches, computer breaches, and Honolulu beaches! M.C. and a H.N.Y! :) gw
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