Paloma P Poet Carpe Diem

Far-Side Blather

'Tis quite evident,
no pulchritude remains
apart pellucid poetry 'pon
figments' elegantly refined
persuasions which are
quite simply volition 
mid-flight delusions
seizing daily routines'
fragmented derangement,
traipsing 'tween vague
blathers' vacuous
mindlessness 'midst heady
illusionist's mused intentions
of an inaudible presence
taken compulsion o'er silence

above & further the farside 
poetically conceptualized
amenable druthers and
superfluous divergency
of an obscure obsession

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Freddie Robinson Jr. January 10, 2017 at 10:27 PM Your poem rocks! Reading your kaleidoscopic thoughts is kinda an obsession. Your language is pure Paloma. Ty for the fun ride to the other side of obscurity. Any poem w/the word "druthers" is a winner in my book. Love and kisses to you.

Ovidiu Bocsa December 4, 2016 at 7:11 AM Obscure obsession beyond the silence in which the trees are growing in no time amber to keep the words-flowers ”elegantly refined persuasions” for hidden beauty to stay. Remarkable, unforgettable tenderness of the day.

White Wolf December 1, 2016 at 10:52 PM All I can say is keep it up, it seems to work! It's always a pleasure reading you!

Chris Green November 25, 2016 at 8:14 AM An obscure obsession indeed, though one that constantly brings new thoughts and ideas to the forefront of the mind. Especially when one lands upon your page, because nothing like this (your poetry) exists anywhere on this earth or in any other realm that I know of. Mystical, enchanting, otherworldly and such a mind invader.

Justin Bordner November 25, 2016 at 2:18 AM As a lover of unique language, your poetry is a delicacy of fine ingredients, and your intellect a provocative engagement. Perhaps every dream, and pursuit begins as a delusion Paloma. To criticize our inspirations requires an odd moxie that can lead us to wisdom or waste...J.A.B.

Heidi Sands November 24, 2016 at 7:49 PM Wow! Now That is something Paloma! I don't know how you do it, but you do :)