Farm Sense

Shotgun shells, fireworks, an empty casing,
Burnt gunpowder sensed with imagined smell,
Bring a smile as the mind begins onward racing,
Of times past and grand stories to retell,
Hunts to remember; 4th of Julys raising hell.

Even the repugnant is remembered with glee,
Fresh swine manure upon beds of loose straw,
Time on the farm, a boy’s life lived carefree,
Fishing, hunting, and building with grandpa,
Learning gun safety and how to hammer and saw.

A favorite to this day is corn cut fresh,
Dust in the air with stalked rows piled,
Behind the red tractor and an 8 row thresh.
Memories overflow of that innocent child
Of the fun that was had, a boy in the wild.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Steele Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Well written, Michael. I'll take farm over city, any day. Congrats.
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March 31, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Back with congrats <3
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Well done, Michael. Congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Well, I don't remember some of these as pleasant but each person has their taste. Thank you for your participation in my contest. Congrats on being on the winners' list. Sara
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:45 PM
such vivid images Michael, thanks for sharing these memories:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Gupta Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:07 PM
A pleasant read for me ... congratulations on your fine win ...
Talbot Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:57 AM
Congratulations Michael on a great win! Mick
Vacek Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Thank you Mick...
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Congratulations on your win, Michael! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
Vacek Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Easter is a good time to reflect on blessings received but not earned.
Gentry Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:22 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories!
Vacek Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 11:03 AM
I really enjoyed my time in Storm Lake, Iowa as a kid...Thank you
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Pleasure to read! Faving that for future indulgence, fabulous poetry Michael :)
Vacek Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Thank you Maureen. My most vivid memory of that time was the sounds...that was back in the day when hog farms were outdoors...I remember the clankity clank of the feed bins as they opened and closed.
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