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Farm Life At Dawn

As dawn starts to streak across the sky heralding in the new born day. Feisty rooster already perched on the wall giving forth with all his might, he crows. Sleepy hens, ducks and geese scat for worms. Low moos emitting from the milking parlour mingling with the sucking sounds of machines as they gather the rich creamy milk in containers. Banging of impatient hooves from the shire horses hungry for their grain, tossing heads and stamping, loud neighs and whinnies fill the early dawn. Soon they will be at work ploughing and farrowing fields. Farmhouse door opens smell of eggs and bacon wafting, farmer's wife emerges carrying pails heavy with slops. As she nears the pigsty the grunts and squeals grow barging, pushing as they search for tasty scraps. A caterwaul of noise from the rookery deafening, as they wheel and spin around the yard thieving. Slowly as the animals return to the sweet meadows life settles back to normal, until tomorrows dawn. written 09/15/2013 contest Nature

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Date: 12/13/2013 11:45:00 PM
Shadow, this is a nice and wonderful win...LINDA
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Date: 12/14/2013 2:41:00 PM
hi Linda Merry Christmas to you and yours ty for reading much appreciated Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/13/2013 11:22:00 AM
I love the sound of this life...so well done. congrats. Bg
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Date: 12/14/2013 2:42:00 PM
hi Barbara idyllic life. ty so much for your feedback Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/13/2013 11:10:00 AM
What a great poem depicting the farm environs so well I could almost smell the silage lol. A great poem well done. Congrats on your win to.
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Date: 12/14/2013 2:43:00 PM
hi Seosamh lol a smell not to be forgotten. ty so much for reading Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/13/2013 9:10:00 AM
Shadow, thanks for the support rendered.I thought nette and Dr.Mehta are the big ones and did the jurying lightly.I was shocked to see many big names after publishing.Next time i jury i do it with solid 10 parameters. To be very frank your poem is next to excellent.I could comprehend it in many ways.Any way i liked the poem.I enjoyed reading it.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/13/2013 9:42:00 AM
ty Jenish for the contest, the feedback and my place I nearly entered another but it was an epic so went with this Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 12/13/2013 8:20:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem nature, Congrats, Shadow
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Date: 12/13/2013 9:43:00 AM
ty so much Ram I am on my way to read your entry next Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 9/30/2013 3:41:00 PM
Great descriptions of life on the farm. I live in Wisconsin, in the United States, so reading this poem made it feel like home to me. Wonderful work, Shadow! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind comments!
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Date: 10/1/2013 5:08:00 PM
Ty Kelly i enjoy farm life used to work on one many moons ago. Shadow x smile
Date: 9/26/2013 4:29:00 PM
congrats on your win Shadow
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Date: 10/1/2013 5:08:00 PM
Ty Joseph Shadow x smile
Date: 9/26/2013 3:43:00 AM
Congrats. Morgan
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Date: 9/26/2013 4:28:00 AM
ty morgan Shadow x smile
Date: 9/26/2013 12:42:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Shadow
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Date: 9/26/2013 4:30:00 AM
Dr Ram Ty and for reading it Shadow x smile
Date: 9/25/2013 9:10:00 PM
Shadow, love the win, Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/26/2013 4:30:00 AM
Hi Skat ty so much Shadow x smile
Date: 9/25/2013 7:17:00 PM
wow...thanks for the adventure on the farm...love how you crafted this one, good poem, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/26/2013 4:31:00 AM
Ty Sandra for your kind review and congrats Shadow x smile
Date: 9/25/2013 5:11:00 PM
Hi Shadow, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my Any Poem Goes contest. Exactly what I was looking for, SIMPLE-PLEASING & BEAUTIFUL- teasing the reader with such awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest blog! " Animal Cruelty " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15953&PoetID=18720 **LINDA
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Date: 9/26/2013 4:34:00 AM
ty Linda for placing my poem and running contest you do so much for Soup and its much appreciated Shadow x smile (will look in)
Date: 9/21/2013 3:34:00 PM
a grand circle you painted here Shadow....thanks for reading my poem......warm wishes to you for the U.S.A.
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Date: 9/22/2013 5:13:00 AM
hi and ty Wayne enjoyed your work Shadow x smile
Date: 9/20/2013 7:08:00 AM
Wow, a vivid write Shadow, you definitely take the reader with you on this journey :) hugs Wilma
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:03:00 AM
Hi Wilma and ty so much for such positive feedback Shadow x smile
Date: 9/19/2013 2:15:00 PM
You wrote this so well you had me right there on the farm with you. Nice one, Shadow. Licia :-)
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Date: 9/19/2013 3:51:00 PM
hi Licia I am glad it took you there ty for your lovely review Shadow x smile
Date: 9/15/2013 11:21:00 AM
You remind me of the milk we used to have delivered fresh in Glass bottles from out Dairy , growing up ..those young American Days ..'Oh No..i just got a itch to write on that ! " Love , Yvette
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Date: 9/15/2013 11:31:00 AM
forget the bottles I remember the pails with such thick yellow cream floating on top still warm from the cow glad I could inspire you to write ty for review Shadow x smile
Date: 9/15/2013 8:47:00 AM
wow..I miss this life.. I know live in a town, were we don't get to experience the beauty of natures dawn.. enjoyed...Linda
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Date: 9/15/2013 11:35:00 AM
up at first light while all others slumber is a grand wee time of day Linda wherever you live ty for enjoying Shadow x smile
Date: 9/15/2013 6:08:00 AM
- Sounds beautiful and delicious Shadow - Pleased to read your poem, as always. - (do you live on a farm?) - Have a nice Sunday! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2013 6:16:00 AM
not any more Anne Lise now I live in small village with farms all round me. Ty for reading and enjoying Shadow x smile

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