Far-Gone

 There once was a man that was far-gone
Whisky, beer, vodka he had sipped on
Then on corner called a cab
Into the phone he did blab
Come to corner of Walk_Don't Walk peon 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Christian Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 2:24 PM
thanks for your kind comments sarah on my poem fathers day, I got baptized on fathers d ay in 1003 so have lots to look forward too now,
Christian Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 2:46 PM
thanks sarah for you kind comments on my poem so close yet so fara way, it is real life sadly, but god has all in his hands so i am now free, i had prayer tonight and had a good cry and am fine now, some times we best off just with God, take care my dear friend from diane
Goff Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 2:06 PM
Not a drop touches these lips anymore, Sara! This is why! Jimbo
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 1:02 PM
a fun read all the way, sara.. i like your crisp sense of humor.. on to the winning list!...:) hugggs!
Babcock Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 11:17 AM
You have me smiling with this lim this morning Sara. Cute one. love phyl
Christian Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 3:53 AM
aww a nice poem and thanks for your kind commentsd on my poem dedicated to my poetry soup friends,
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 8:18 PM
haha. the way you spelled it at the end. VEry cute, Sara.
Culverhouse Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 8:08 PM
cute one mom! We had a good time at VBS this year.
Greenlee Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 7:17 PM
Deff. one of my faves now Sara...INTERTAINMENT!! Thanks for stopping in and reading my work,much thanks,sincerely,Kacey
Johnson Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 4:36 PM
the non mexican , pee-on, love it mate well done
Johnson Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 6:15 PM
i still thing it is cute babe
Sivey Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 3:32 PM
Ah yes, this is a very funny limerick my friend! I really enjoyed the great last line you presented at the end! Excellent Work!!
Sanderson Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 2:40 PM
"Very nice, limerick Sara. Carma"
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