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Butterfly, Insects, Nature, Flowers

(sublime) such sublime warm days of beauty - stained leaves are falling (divine) the leaves dance as trees send their divine - fragile snowflakes floats _________________________ October 16, 2021 Poetry/Lune/Haiku/farewells Copyright Protected, ID 10-1397-885-16 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Lune (Mixed Pair) sponsor, William Kekaula, Judged 10/28/2021 Eighth Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/29/2021 10:49:00 AM

Constance, back with congratulations for your win. So many "subline" and absolutely "divine" images. I love the contrast of summer to winter that you so subtly link with "stained leaves." Blessings of gentle grace to you.

Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2021 7:28:00 AM

Sam, thanks for the great comment, compliment and congratulations, blessing ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/28/2021 10:37:00 PM

Great farewells. Beautiful imagery.

Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2021 8:15:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/28/2021 8:38:00 PM

Congratulations, Constance, for your excellent win in William’s contest with your beautiful poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2021 8:16:00 AM

Susan, thank you for the congratulations and for the compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Ann Peck

Date: 10/28/2021 12:27:00 PM

Dear Constance, Yes, alas ~ farewell to Summer, and soon to Autumn, but your poem describes Winter's snow so beautifully, I can almost look forward to Winter ~ almost :) Congratulations on your placement!

Constance La France
Date: 10/28/2021 12:48:00 PM

Ann, thank you for the comment and the compliment and the congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/28/2021 8:18:00 AM

Constance, your Lune airs a breath of gentle sweetness that courses beautifully my friend, my compliments for your blessed efforts and placement, Aloha!

Constance La France
Date: 10/28/2021 11:20:00 AM

William, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and for my placement, I am very honored and thanks for the comment and compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2021 5:30:00 AM

such lovely seasonal imagery Constance, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 10/28/2021 5:58:00 AM

Jan, thank you for the compliment and the congrats, hugs ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/18/2021 2:08:00 PM

Love your dainty divine dancing leaves, Constance. Best wishes for the contest. Soup mail.

Constance La France
Date: 10/18/2021 3:09:00 PM

Sam, thanks for the lovely comment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/18/2021 1:05:00 PM

delicate, dainty and pretty!

Constance La France
Date: 10/18/2021 3:09:00 PM

Caren, oh thank you for the lovely compliment, you are sweet ~ love and serenity _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/17/2021 11:36:00 AM

Hello Constance, Yes it is the change of season. I sleep with the window open a little. I really felt the cold air this morning It felt like winter. Very cold. Tranquility and Love, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2021 3:14:00 PM

Hello Constance, when I awoke this morning it felt like winter. Strange weather we are having. Soon it will be winter not my fav. season. Serenity and Love. Darlene

Constance La France
Date: 10/17/2021 1:44:00 PM

Darlene, thanks so much for the visit and comment, yes said farewell to Summer, soon it will be farewell to Fall and hello to Winter ~ love and serenity _Constance