Constance La France Poet Haiku

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Farewells

 
(sublime)

such sublime warm days
of beauty -
stained leaves are falling

(divine)

the leaves dance
as trees send their divine -
fragile snowflakes floats  

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October 16, 2021


Poetry/Lune/Haiku/farewells
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1397-885-16
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France


Written for the Premier contest, Lune (Mixed Pair)
sponsor, William Kekaula, Judged 10/28/2021

Eighth Place

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Sam Kauffman October 29, 2021 at 10:49 AM Constance, back with congratulations for your win. So many "subline" and absolutely "divine" images. I love the contrast of summer to winter that you so subtly link with "stained leaves." Blessings of gentle grace to you. Constance La France October 30, 2021 at 7:28 AM Sam, thanks for the great comment, compliment and congratulations, blessing ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Christuraj Alex October 28, 2021 at 10:37 PM Great farewells. Beautiful imagery. Constance La France October 29, 2021 at 8:15 AM Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Susan Ashley October 28, 2021 at 8:38 PM Congratulations, Constance, for your excellent win in William’s contest with your beautiful poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Constance La France October 29, 2021 at 8:16 AM Susan, thank you for the congratulations and for the compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Ann Peck October 28, 2021 at 12:27 PM Dear Constance, Yes, alas ~ farewell to Summer, and soon to Autumn, but your poem describes Winter's snow so beautifully, I can almost look forward to Winter ~ almost :) Congratulations on your placement! Constance La France October 28, 2021 at 12:48 PM Ann, thank you for the comment and the compliment and the congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Jan Allison October 28, 2021 at 5:30 AM such lovely seasonal imagery Constance, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France October 28, 2021 at 5:58 AM Jan, thank you for the compliment and the congrats, hugs ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Sam Kauffman October 18, 2021 at 2:08 PM Love your dainty divine dancing leaves, Constance. Best wishes for the contest. Soup mail. Constance La France October 18, 2021 at 3:09 PM Sam, thanks for the lovely comment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Caren Krutsinger October 18, 2021 at 1:05 PM delicate, dainty and pretty! Constance La France October 18, 2021 at 3:09 PM Caren, oh thank you for the lovely compliment, you are sweet ~ love and serenity _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu October 17, 2021 at 11:36 AM Hello Constance, Yes it is the change of season. I sleep with the window open a little. I really felt the cold air this morning It felt like winter. Very cold. Tranquility and Love, Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu October 17, 2021 at 3:14 PM Hello Constance, when I awoke this morning it felt like winter. Strange weather we are having. Soon it will be winter not my fav. season. Serenity and Love. Darlene Constance La France October 17, 2021 at 1:44 PM Darlene, thanks so much for the visit and comment, yes said farewell to Summer, soon it will be farewell to Fall and hello to Winter ~ love and serenity _Constance