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Farewell To Summer

Farewell to summer, daily bringing heat
Arrivederci, warmth, I'll miss you so
Reluctantly, I bid adieu to waves
Enjoyed in balmy weather, thanks to you
Waving goodbye to toes bathed in a stream
Extending elegies of wakened dream
Lost to a frigid blast of autumn's gale
Laughing - to know that you'll be back next year

Written 8 Oct 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 12:51 PM
Now this is impressive John! I think you have a winner on your hands! Blessings xxoo
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:42 PM
I appreciate your thoughtful comment and blessings Connie. Hugs to you ~ John
Daniel Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 12:40 AM
Wonderful writing, John:)
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:42 PM
Thank you, kind Jo.
Faulkner Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 7:18 PM
While I won't miss the 'balmy' weather (it's been a little too balmy for me!) I like your nostalgic wink to the last days of summer, especially love the line 'Extending elegies of wakened dream' - should do well!
Watt Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 11:00 PM
Yes, I admit sometimes summers can get a bit too 'summery'! Grateful for your generous words, Michelle.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 6:17 AM
WOW. You did a great job with this. So sweet and succulent. I love it. God bless you and I wish you a win :)
Watt Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Thank you kindly, Gina. Always grateful for your supportive and thoughtful comments. Enjoy your weekend ~ John
Horsman Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 1:36 AM
Head and tail acrostic, very clever John, not easy to come up with that, yet your poetry brings out the subject so well, one could almost be within the poetry itself.
Watt Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 12:06 PM
Thank you kind sir, for your insightful comment. So feel that you are within the poetry is perhaps the highest compliment one can receive. I feel this one deeply because I dearly miss summer when it is over.
Crabtree Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 7:49 PM
Well penned and presented, John. Even though I like Autumn, I too hate to see summer go. Have a great night. :)
Watt Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 9:01 PM
I think you speak for many of us, Angie. Summer has that certain magic that we all seem to resonate with.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 6:34 PM
what an excellent poem, John ,putting the rest of the phrase over to the far right. Genius idea. I love the words. I too feel this way every time fall arrives.
Watt Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 9:00 PM
It is hard to say goodbye. Thanks for your benevolent assessment, Andrea.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Arriverderci! Nice!
Watt Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 7:14 PM
Grazie, Kim!
Bauer Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 1:58 PM
wow! it's amazing how you've formatted this poem, john! i'm so glad you highlighted the letters at the beginning and the end of each line or i might have missed the ending words. brilliant!
Watt Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 2:29 PM
If i can impress the inimitable ilene, i have had a good day. Thanks for the good day, my friend!
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