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It's autumn on Oak Avenue, Sing birds so blue. Summer has gone, They'll fly with dawn. Other tangerine suns entice- Green paradise! Azure skies call, Come leave it all! For life is about variance, Time's radiance, Like painted skies, At the sunrise. Written on 7/17/2021 For: 12 Lines In Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 7/28/2021 5:24:00 AM
Other tangerine suns entice- Green paradise…back with Congrats!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim. :)
Date: 7/26/2021 10:27:00 AM
Lovely write Evelyn, Congrats on your win..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2021 10:31:00 AM
I'm so honored. Thank you very much, Joseph.
Date: 7/26/2021 10:08:00 AM
The season and passing of time painted in loveliness with hues of summer and autumn, Evelyn. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2021 10:35:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful, warm words of regard and congratulations, Sam. Kindest regards, Evelyn
Date: 7/26/2021 10:06:00 AM
WoW! Evelyn, The photo and your poem work well together. Good descriptions and imagery. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place. It was well deserved. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2021 10:37:00 AM
I appreciate your very nice remarks. Have a wonderful day yourself, dear Alexis. :) Evelyn
Date: 7/26/2021 10:05:00 AM
For life is about variance - Beautifully said. Congratulations on your win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2021 10:38:00 AM
You have my heartfelt thanks. :)
Date: 7/26/2021 9:41:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Evelyn. Janice
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2021 10:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janice. Evelyn :)
Date: 7/26/2021 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Love It. Have a blessed day.................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2021 10:40:00 AM
I am thrilled. Thank you, Paula
Date: 7/18/2021 3:57:00 PM
So beautiful, Evelyn!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/18/2021 4:01:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. :D
Date: 7/18/2021 12:40:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Evelyn :) - Saying goodbye to summer makes me sad ... autumn is wet and brown ... winter is dark and long - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/18/2021 3:51:00 PM
At least in autumn there is crisp, colorful beauty and Thanksgiving, and in winter we have lovely snows, and Christmas. Thank you for your nice remarks and good wishes. hugs :) Evelyn
Date: 7/18/2021 10:58:00 AM
Evelyn, 'Farewell to Oak Avenue' indeed. I love to bask in the atmosphere your poems create. Seems you provide a full daily dose of vitamins in citrus and sun. -Richard
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Date: 7/18/2021 11:20:00 AM
Your words strike a happy chord with me, Richard. I am so pleased to have provided citrus and sun. Thanks so much for your kind regard. :) Evelyn
Date: 7/18/2021 9:16:00 AM
Delightful, insightful, and beautifully penned poem, Evelyn. I wish you all the best with the contest.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/18/2021 11:23:00 AM
Thank you very much for your genial thoughts and well wishes, Lasaad. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Date: 7/17/2021 10:14:00 PM
Lovely, delightful, loved the lines " For life is about variance, Time's radiance,". All the best for contest
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/18/2021 11:29:00 AM
Your thoughtful, kind words are much appreciated, my friend. Have a wonderful day. :)
Date: 7/17/2021 9:49:00 PM
Excellent. Makes one want to read it again. Great images. Blessings
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/18/2021 11:32:00 AM
Many thanks for the sunny comment. Blessings and hugs. :)
Date: 7/17/2021 7:12:00 PM
Beautiful, a delight to read. Stay Safe. Harry
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/17/2021 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Harry. You be safe as well. :)
Date: 7/17/2021 6:21:00 PM
Love the images toward the end of summer, Evelyn. Nice job!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/17/2021 8:10:00 PM
I am very pleased that you do, Milton. Thank you. :)

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