Farewell, Summer

When summertime has kissed the rose, And nestling trees blossom so fair The dappled leaves twirl in repose, Bathed in mist’s spray… beyond compare. I crave her touch on paths winding Like a damsel amid lush grass; Sultry when the vibrant breeze flings, As limbs thrusts in passion’s contrasts. On blushes of night’s wild glimpses Embroidering her russet veil; In slow movement… this enchantress Drops heat’s thrill while she bids farewell. As mornings welcome Autumn’s gold My breath lifts in a mellow way, When tinsels of fog glide… to unfold A silver whirl through fall’s ballet. Kelly Deschler's Summer's End Contest 8/30/2014 by nette onclaud
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February 16, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Nette, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
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February 15, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Nette, CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
Arowolo Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Lovely and Superb write...Congrats on your well deserved win...Great poetess.
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Nette :-) hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 1:29 PM
A lovely poem from my "Summer's End" contest. It was a pleasure to read it once again, Nette. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating!
Mohn Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 3:53 PM
Beautiful Nette...the last 2 lines are pure magic!
Trichet Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Well done Nette, a deserved top place. Loved it and congrats too
Curtis Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on the top spot !
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 4:49 AM
Lovely write, congrats on the win, nette
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 4:24 AM
- Not a surprise, Nette ..... first place .... Congrats my friend well deserved !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 10:04 PM
congrats on the win.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, It's Such a joy to read your lovely poem Nette
Deschler Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 7:23 PM
I enjoyed this beautiful, romantic dance between the summer and autumn seasons.... A lovely poem, Nette! Great use of metaphors here, as well. Congratulations on your first place win!
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 7:17 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 2:12 PM
again, very very beautiful prose!
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 9:20 PM
I really really like this one, Nette. You did summer proud!! and then comes the beauty of the fall. I am sure this will top the chart!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Just stunning imagery in this beautiful entry Nette. It would be at the top of my list.
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 10:08 AM
This is beautiful Nette! Imagery is a tool you use extremely well. The final three lines whirl and twirl in elegant steps. Have a lovely week. // paul
Yvonne Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 6:49 AM
excellent. i love your words. thank you.
Lalion Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 9:46 PM
Goodness, I was in the scene with your heady description of this season. Wonderful flow and rhythm, Nette, A fav it is!
Manassian Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Your imagery always leaves me in awe...how you combine words to make these word pictures is amazing. Good luck in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 1:56 PM
- A truly beautiful poem, Nette - Enjoy reading - I wish you good luck in the contest - hope YOU win !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) *** NO NAMES ON POEM !!!
Allison Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 7:42 AM
A sultry write.. what a pure delight:-) lovely imagery as ever Nette:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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