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Farewell, My Loves


And now, it's here- that day, austere,
     when from your lives, I leave with drear,
          these words I share with love- sincere,
for you, my lifetime, to revere.

Dear husband, try to persevere-
     our hearts stay joined by Cupid's spear.
        Hold close our memories, with cheer;
embrace, with love, each yesteryear. 

My children, these last words appear
     with strength; my love for you, right here
          and from Beyond, remains, premiere;
I, part of you- shan't disappear.

Grandchildren five, how I endear
     your special love- from far or near.
          Through me, you came, another tier;
remember me- your pioneer.

Safeguard my paintings, for it's clear
     they are my talent's souvenir.
          What you can't keep, then volunteer
to nursing homes for atmosphere.

My poetry, please read, adhere
     how love for words did engineer
          some beauty, wisdom that may steer
your thoughts to form a peaceful sphere.

And, now I go- please have no fear;
     from up above Earth's stratosphere,
          where angels glide with wings so sheer-
I'll love you from Beyond's Frontier.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 6:01 PM
Congratulations, Sandra, for your excellent win in William's contest with this tender and touching poem. Splendid imagery, rich emotion and so beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 9:37 PM
A magnificent theme, added with your formatted design and angelic picture, accentuates your poem profoundly. Blessings, Sandra, for sharing your heartwarming talents, Aloha!
Toney Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 9:35 PM
Sandra, this is a lovely, heartfelt monorhyme. Congrats on your win on mile 9 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. By continuing to place in the contest you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Thank you very much, Mark, for my nine placement and your lovely comment. Much appreciated. Sandra
Messina Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 10:01 PM
Wow, Sandra! Such a wonderful poem and well deserved of a first place win. Amazing how you incorporated so many rhymes and like John said..it doesn't feel forced at all. Congratulations! Charlie
Haight Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Thank you so much, Charles, for your visit, congrats, and very uplifting comments. I appreciate them so much! Sandra :)
Hamilton Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 7:55 AM
I have to agree with Greg on this, I don't think I've seen a better mono rhyme ever. 28 rhymes and it doesn't feel forced at all! Congrats Sandra on a well deserved top win!
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Thank you so much, John, for your visit, congrats, and very uplifting and supportive comments. Much appreciated! Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your first place win. What a poem indeed.. great.
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:12 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal, for your congratulations and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Duet Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 11:37 PM
What a wonderful poem and legacy! Just great and congratulations on your win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Thank you so much, Carole, for your visit, congrats, and very supportive comments! Sandra
Gentry Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win. Beautiful, well-written poem.
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your congrats and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Celestial, ethereal, … yet very real! Congrats on your 1st place win, Sandra. Richly deserved. Blessings, Gershon
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. I appreciate your visits and supports very much. Sandra
Ward Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 9:24 AM
Impressive work!
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Thank you very much, Julia, for your visit and supportive comment! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Well that got the tears rolling. Splendid touching wonderful love filled winning piece Sandra, Congrtulations and Big Hugs! xomo <3
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen, for your very empathetic comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 5:48 AM
Such beautiful poetry...and congrats!!! on your top win my friend...worthy you are...love & light...^WW^
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Thank you, WW, for your very uplifting comments and congrats! Much appreciated! Sandra :)
Lawless Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 5:28 AM
Way to go Sandra......TA-DA.....and congrats on the top spot
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Thank you very much, John! I appreciate your supportive comment and congrats! Sandra
Moorman Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 2:30 AM
Tremendous Lady! Tremendous Poem! Tremendous 1st Place Win! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Curtis, for all the 'tremendous' comments! I so much appreciate your visit and support! Sandra :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 2:05 AM
Sandra, the fact that you wrote this in monorhyme is beyond impressive! I agree with Greg...it stands alone as the top winner. Congratulations on your very deserving first place win! I honestly did not see this or would have commented! This masterpiece is going into my Faves! xxoo
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Thank you, dear Connie, for your very kind and uplifting comments, congratulations, and the Fave! I am humbled by this wonderful win, and I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Hugs, Sandra
Watson Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 1:53 AM
What a wonderful creative ‘legacy’ to leave your family, Sandra. I can imagine that your paintings would have a similar depth and beauty to them. Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy, for your lovely, uplifting comments and congratulations. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem!. Hugs, Sandra
Waters Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 1:39 AM
beautiful sentiments and poem - congratulations, such flowing thoughtfulness
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Thank you again, Wendy, for your visit and very uplifting and supportive comments and congrats! I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Barden Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 1:31 AM
I can't believe this only has three comments, Sandra, (perhaps a few more now) - this is absolutely exquisite, and just blew me away ... perfect rhythm and tempo, sublime imagery and phrasing, a wonderfully heartfelt story, and all in a 28-line MONORHYME! I honestly have never seen a better poem here of that form, and you should be so VERY proud of this masterpiece of poetic excellence. I am NOT overstating. Sincere congratulations for your sole 1st place! (Which I had not intended) :-) <3
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Wow...what can I say, Greg, about my amazing placement and your so very supportive and uplifting comments about my Monorhyme poem. I feel honored and humbled both, and I thank you so much for your very inspiring contest theme which made me think of my deep, emotional love for family and how I would express my feelings in a poem to be left to them someday. Again, thank you so much, Greg! Sandra :) <3
Man Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:07 PM
Sandra.. what a wonderful poem that tugs on the heart with exquisite flair!
Haight Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thank you very much, Lyric Man! Much appreciated! Sandra
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 3:11 PM
- Heartbreaking beautiful, Sandra - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs, Sandra
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