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Farewell Love

I say farewell my love- oh, I am falling apart, we have reached the end of the road . . . two now one; yes, so true- I need to walk away as there is nothing left, but will paint you in my mind 'till all my days are done. ____________________________ November 17, 2020 Poetry/Quatrain/Farewell Love Copyright Protected, ID 11-1305-496-17 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Quat-Ro- 4 Lines of Poetry sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 11/19/20 First Place

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Date: 11/20/2020 5:52:00 PM
Metaphoric marvel Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2020 8:24:00 AM
Caren, thank you for the compliment _Constance
Date: 11/20/2020 12:01:00 AM
Gorgeous poetry, Constance. Sad and elegant. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2020 8:25:00 AM
John, thank you for the compliment and congrats _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 4:33:00 PM
So beautiful, Dear Heart. Big congrats
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Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2020 8:25:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for the beautiful and congrats _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 10:20:00 AM
Very moving well done.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2020 8:26:00 AM
Peter, thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 7:42:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Love.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2020 8:26:00 AM
Anisha, thanks for the congrats and love _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 6:55:00 AM
So moving, Constance--CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2020 8:27:00 AM
Janice, thank you for the comment and congrats _Constance
Date: 11/19/2020 6:28:00 AM
Hi BW, What a sad yet endearing write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day-Alexis
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Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2020 8:27:00 AM
Alexis, thank you for the lovely comment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 11/18/2020 12:53:00 PM
Lovely poem, sweet lady. God bless you
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Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2020 5:25:00 AM
Gina, thank you for visiting with the lovely _Constance
Date: 11/18/2020 12:31:00 PM
lovely loving thoughts here, my friend x
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Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2020 5:26:00 AM
Jack, thanks for the lovely _Constance
Date: 11/18/2020 8:00:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Each day I think about those loved ones who have gone before. Thanks for dropping by my page. I don't know if I have said thank you for the honor of being in your winners' list, if not thank you. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2020 5:27:00 AM
Srar, thank you for visiting and commenting on my poem and you are welcome on your win in my Tercet contest _Constance
Date: 11/17/2020 6:37:00 PM
This short poem took my breath away....I have no words for this gem dear Heart.. I will read this in years and years to come...So unforgettable!!! Straight to my fav list.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2020 6:02:00 AM
JCB, thank you so much for your compassion and compliment on my poem of lost love, and for the FAV _ Constance

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