Constance La France Poet Quatrain

Farewell Love

 
I say farewell my love-   oh, I am falling apart,
we have reached the end of the road . . . two now one;
yes, so true-   I need to walk away as there is nothing left,
but will paint you in my mind 'till all my days are done. 


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November 17, 2020

Poetry/Quatrain/Farewell Love
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1305-496-17
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest,  Quat-Ro- 4 Lines of  Poetry
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 11/19/20

First Place

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Caren Krutsinger November 20, 2020 at 5:52 PM Metaphoric marvel Constance! Constance La France November 21, 2020 at 8:24 AM Caren, thank you for the compliment _Constance

John Watt November 20, 2020 at 12:01 AM Gorgeous poetry, Constance. Sad and elegant. Congrats on your win ~ John Constance La France November 21, 2020 at 8:25 AM John, thank you for the compliment and congrats _Constance

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2020 at 4:33 PM So beautiful, Dear Heart. Big congrats Constance La France November 21, 2020 at 8:25 AM Andrea, thank you for the beautiful and congrats _Constance

Peter Dome November 19, 2020 at 10:20 AM Very moving well done. Constance La France November 21, 2020 at 8:26 AM Peter, thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment _Constance

Anisha Dutta November 19, 2020 at 7:42 AM BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Love. Constance La France November 21, 2020 at 8:26 AM Anisha, thanks for the congrats and love _Constance

Janice Canerdy November 19, 2020 at 6:55 AM So moving, Constance--CONGRATS on your win. Janice Constance La France November 21, 2020 at 8:27 AM Janice, thank you for the comment and congrats _Constance

Alexis Y. November 19, 2020 at 6:28 AM Hi BW, What a sad yet endearing write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day-Alexis Constance La France November 21, 2020 at 8:27 AM Alexis, thank you for the lovely comment and the congratulations _Constance

Regina Mcintosh November 18, 2020 at 12:53 PM Lovely poem, sweet lady. God bless you Constance La France November 19, 2020 at 5:25 AM Gina, thank you for visiting with the lovely _Constance

Jack Horne November 18, 2020 at 12:31 PM lovely loving thoughts here, my friend x Constance La France November 19, 2020 at 5:26 AM Jack, thanks for the lovely _Constance

Sara Kendrick November 18, 2020 at 8:00 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Each day I think about those loved ones who have gone before. Thanks for dropping by my page. I don't know if I have said thank you for the honor of being in your winners' list, if not thank you. Sara Constance La France November 19, 2020 at 5:27 AM Srar, thank you for visiting and commenting on my poem and you are welcome on your win in my Tercet contest _Constance

JC Brul November 17, 2020 at 6:37 PM This short poem took my breath away....I have no words for this gem dear Heart.. I will read this in years and years to come...So unforgettable!!! Straight to my fav list. Constance La France November 18, 2020 at 6:02 AM JCB, thank you so much for your compassion and compliment on my poem of lost love, and for the FAV _ Constance