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Farewell Kiss

His Twinkling Kiss hisses How he will miss princesses when homeward tiredly he plods. We see his sweetest farewell kiss; so I'll, Letting them kiss As they wish, Gently Pass.
Picture 2 Syllable Count: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 - 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 http://www.howmanysyllables.com *3rd Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 1, 2020) Sept. 21, 2020 Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 10/7/2020 2:38:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go for the contest. Sara
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Date: 10/7/2020 2:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for your kind visit and this sweet comment!!
Date: 10/2/2020 6:06:00 PM
Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Newton , congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"
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Date: 10/2/2020 7:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your third place in the contest, Newton :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 10/2/2020 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being honored on the winner's list, Newton.
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Date: 10/2/2020 10:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenna, for your visit and the comment!!
Date: 10/2/2020 6:18:00 AM
Soft and sweet Newton. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/2/2020 9:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Linda, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 10/1/2020 8:30:00 PM
Newton, such beautiful imagery and sweet emotions grace your exquisite poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/1/2020 8:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for this immensely lovely comment, Suasan!!
Date: 9/24/2020 6:25:00 PM
I love reading these kinds of poems . good job, Newton
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Date: 9/24/2020 6:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this great comment!!
Date: 9/22/2020 4:10:00 AM
- A lovely double tetractys poem, Newton :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/23/2020 12:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this immensely sweet comment!!

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