Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

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Joseph Rodefer DeCamp

Farewell I Go To Dwell

Under the awaking dawn
I sit, tracing the sea's yawn
Of innumerable sand grains,
Swell waves without reins.

Light scattering, exciting risin
Reflections off the horizon
The lull breeze caress silence
Like your arms once presence

Held me tightly in its embrace.
Tho, I still, you I chase.

Bragging to the stars I dwell
The last time I saw you- Farewell,
I said against you I did whisper
In a faint whimper.


Your last kiss
I do miss

7/11/2022

Sponsor	Lisa YY
Contest Name	FAREWELL

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Ann Peck July 28, 2022 at 5:35 PM Dear Eve, Following Angela's suggestion, I also read it backward and it's beautiful both ways :) I love "swell waves without reins." Congratulations!

Michael Tor July 18, 2022 at 5:39 PM Oh what a lovely write mixed in with a special want of missing that special persons kiss, Heartfelt piece Eve a favorite for me for I have experienced these touching words in my life. God bless you for sharing it...

Frederic Parker July 14, 2022 at 2:18 PM Congratulations, Eve, of memories held and tenderly felt

Ann Peck July 14, 2022 at 1:52 PM Oh, so sad, Eve ~ especially your last two lines. Very lovely. Congratulations, my friend.

Paula Goldsmith July 14, 2022 at 8:36 AM Congratulations on your win. Your line, "Your last kiss I do miss." Says it all. Have a great/blessed day.................

Valsa George July 13, 2022 at 9:45 PM A poem of longing and the pain of absence with some striking images ! Congratulations on your great win, dear Eve !

Victor Buhagiar July 12, 2022 at 1:14 AM Lovely poem. Cannot but agree with your last two lines. Hugs. Eve Roper July 12, 2022 at 9:35 AM Awe, the last kiss I do miss. so, so true.. Blessings my friend