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Farewell Cruel World

I have this wound ...deep inside my heart That just doesn’t stop bleeding The brutal pain I suffered through time Left me with a dark... empty feeling. Can’t you notice the sorrow filled tears That drop from each glum eye The cursed words I yell out to the world… “I just want to ...... i just want to die!!” Can’t you hear the whisper… shhh… Just listen… hear the screams of despair The end seems so near And I don’t really seem to care Hell doesn’t seem too far away I can feel my soul slipping from my grasp My vision seems blurry… I’m losing all thoughts Seems as though I’m about to collapse… I’m strayed from the light Into a pitch of dark nothingness I enter this cavern of fire With pride that I tried my best! This gun feels so heavy Can’t believe my time has come After so many years of being ignored I will finally die alone As tears fall from my eyes And tremble...with the gun pointed at my head Knowing that in a minute or two I will be dead!!! I say goodbye to whoever sees this Because you cared enough to have read Hope I don’t see you where I’m going For you will be filled with regret…… ……………………………………………………… …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/16/2010 5:39:00 PM
Sad love lost write..Sara
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Date: 10/16/2010 10:41:00 AM
Excellent poetry to be reading this Saturday Felipe. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:47:00 AM
Very powerful emotions of despair, Felipe. To write about these feelings so vividly, you must have experienced them. I hope the pain is behind you now. So many people consider suicide as an alternative to living with sadness in their hearts. Strong, heartfelt write. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:33:00 AM
This had a few cursed words for a stronger feeling but took it off... anyway hope you enjoyed it!
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