Farewell

A feather carried her with it into a darkness
which no one could fathom it
my heart cried and i knew that
she was not there to hold me
she has gone far
gone far from the land 
gone far from me.

Her spirit fled in the sky
leaving my emotions falling down as raindrop
having a desire to overwind my feelings far from the clouds
where i can throw my fear from the heart
to bid me an urge of a new life of sight
telling me farewell,farewell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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January 5, 2025 at 6:51 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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August 30, 2020 at 11:11 AM
Great first post, welcome to the soup..
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