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Faraway Places

The sighing breezes slip through trees Drifting to faraway places unimagined Where children’s faces will feel the breeze And dream of faraway places unfathomed. written June 21, 2021

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Anselmo Boles

Date: 7/1/2021 7:51:00 PM

This is an absolute beauty Milton! Translucence and profundity perfectly fused. Bravo!!...ab

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/1/2021 8:04:00 PM

Why, thank you, Anselmo. I know you enjoy traveling, so I'm glad the poem appealed to you.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/21/2021 7:16:00 PM

This, my friend, is profoundly imagined and penned. A FAVE for me, all the way to the other side of the place where dreams go ~ Feeling the Breeze, gw

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/21/2021 7:25:00 PM

Well, thank you, gw. That brings a tear to my eye and a smile to my face. How sweet!

Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/21/2021 3:25:00 PM

What a beautiful poetry talking about distant places, of breezes and children dreaming... salute alkas

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/21/2021 6:38:00 PM

Thanks so much, Alkas. If the COVID thing lets up, I'm planning on coming down your way in January. Your visit and your read was much appreciated.