L Milton Hankins Poet Quatrain

Faraway Places

The sighing breezes slip through trees
Drifting to faraway places unimagined
Where children’s faces will feel the breeze
And dream of faraway places unfathomed.

written June 21, 2021

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Anselmo Boles July 1, 2021 at 7:51 PM This is an absolute beauty Milton! Translucence and profundity perfectly fused. Bravo!!...ab L Milton Hankins July 1, 2021 at 8:04 PM Why, thank you, Anselmo. I know you enjoy traveling, so I'm glad the poem appealed to you.

Gershon Wolf June 21, 2021 at 7:16 PM This, my friend, is profoundly imagined and penned. A FAVE for me, all the way to the other side of the place where dreams go ~ Feeling the Breeze, gw L Milton Hankins June 21, 2021 at 7:25 PM Well, thank you, gw. That brings a tear to my eye and a smile to my face. How sweet!

Alkas Poetry June 21, 2021 at 3:25 PM What a beautiful poetry talking about distant places, of breezes and children dreaming... salute alkas L Milton Hankins June 21, 2021 at 6:38 PM Thanks so much, Alkas. If the COVID thing lets up, I'm planning on coming down your way in January. Your visit and your read was much appreciated.