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Physically, your are this faraway from me But whenever my longing for you burns white-hot You are thisclose I pine for you because you are that far But whenever you rest your sweet lips against the phone And I hear...your voice...your breath...your laughter I smile, for you are suddenly thisnear In the loneliness of an insufferable twilight I cry and moan, because you seem this far! The distance between us wailing into the night like a banshee... Yet, in spite of it, my precious, I love you even more Date: 02/23/2020 Poem title is "Far Yet Close", but changed to "Free Verse On Love" for contest(N/A) Date originally written: 10/21/2018 LATE OCOBER 2018 ,ANY FORM,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 LINES Sponsored by Brian Strand (Winner: 1st Place) Date written and posted: 10/21/2018

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Date: 10/22/2018 6:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem of longing and love...especially the clever spacing to indicate near and far.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/22/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay!:-) Most obliged.

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