Far Out

There was a grade-school dropout named Truperter Whose neighbors in his town said couldn’t be stupidter. He said the earth was flat, Dinosaurs were due back. And he swore Donald Trump has a condo on Jupiter.

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/28/2015 11:24:00 AM

Lol....great write my friend , I really enjoyed reading it...Happy new year and hugs / / :) dalia

Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/31/2015 2:48:00 PM

Dalia, please forgive me for being tardy in responding. I sincerely value and appreciate your kind comment. Thank you for stopping by.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 10/30/2015 9:09:00 PM

I'm with Jan on this one, Paul. Good to read you again. If I my suggest: "Who" should be "Whose" or "The". Best to you. /M

Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/30/2015 10:26:00 PM

Thank you, Maurice. I value and appreciate your comments, which always hit the mark. Why did I not choose Whose? The answer must have something to do with the wages of age. All the best to you and your cherished ones, and thanks again.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/19/2015 11:55:00 AM

ha ha ha love it especially the final line:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/22/2015 8:53:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. You are always gracious and supportive of my efforts (and not just mine). Please know of my appreciation.