Paul Schneiter Poet Limerick

Far Out

There  was a grade-school dropout named Truperter
Whose neighbors in his town said couldn’t be stupidter.
He said the earth was flat,
Dinosaurs were due back.
And he swore Donald Trump has a condo on Jupiter.

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Dalia Shahein December 28, 2015 at 11:24 AM Lol....great write my friend , I really enjoyed reading it...Happy new year and hugs / / :) dalia Paul Schneiter December 31, 2015 at 2:48 PM Dalia, please forgive me for being tardy in responding. I sincerely value and appreciate your kind comment. Thank you for stopping by.

Maurice Rigoler October 30, 2015 at 9:09 PM I'm with Jan on this one, Paul. Good to read you again. If I my suggest: "Who" should be "Whose" or "The". Best to you. /M Paul Schneiter October 30, 2015 at 10:26 PM Thank you, Maurice. I value and appreciate your comments, which always hit the mark. Why did I not choose Whose? The answer must have something to do with the wages of age. All the best to you and your cherished ones, and thanks again.

Jan Allison October 19, 2015 at 11:55 AM ha ha ha love it especially the final line:-) hugs jan xx Paul Schneiter October 22, 2015 at 8:53 PM Thank you, Jan. You are always gracious and supportive of my efforts (and not just mine). Please know of my appreciation.