Far From Submissive

A placid Ocean ripples with undulating, hypnotic waves. And lost within Her depth's embrace; lies the bodies of kings and slaves. Exposing forgotten treasures; cascading breakers seed the shore. And hint at what still lies submerged; deep within Her ebony core. She is a seductive siren; luring fishermen and whalers. And yet, She's far from submissive; drowning impertinent sailors. A potent brew of emotions; gets preserved in Her salty brine. And many crave that elixir; savoring Her bittersweet wine. Her beauty lies just out of reach, yet it's that allure men die for. And it's said time synchronizes with Her tides as they wash ashore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/14/2018 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to the mighty seductive siren that is the sea, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 9/16/2015 2:55:00 PM
great grasp of this devilish and angelic woman, emile.. enjoyed the mythical feel of this piece .. huggs
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Date: 9/16/2015 4:49:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 9/16/2015 1:09:00 PM
Very powerful tribute to the sea. She is both a beauty and a beast. Cheers Tim
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Date: 9/16/2015 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
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