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Far From Submissive

A placid Ocean ripples; with undulating hypnotic waves. In Her depth's eternal embrace lies the bodies of kings and slaves. Exposing forgotten treasures, Her windswept breakers seed the shore. And hint at what still lies submerged, deep within Her ebony core. She is a seductive siren; luring fishermen and whalers. And She is far from submissive, drowning impertinent sailors. A potent brew of emotions is preserved in Her salty brine. And many crave that elixir, savoring Her bittersweet wine. Her beauty beckons, out of reach, yet, it's that allure; men die for. And it's said time synchronizes with Her tides; as they come ashore. (Quatrain) 9/16/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to the mighty seductive siren that is the sea, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 9/16/2015 2:55:00 PM
great grasp of this devilish and angelic woman, emile.. enjoyed the mythical feel of this piece .. huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/16/2015 4:49:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 9/16/2015 1:09:00 PM
Very powerful tribute to the sea. She is both a beauty and a beast. Cheers Tim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/16/2015 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

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